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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 26

The whole chapter, every sentence is so great, awesome, hilarious… Brian’s talk with Keith, how he discovers he could be pregnant, the scene with Brian and Justin, his reaction, Munchkin. I love the way you let them talk, let them behave and I love your writing-style.

“But if you dare die, I’m going to hate you. Forever.” – As funny as it sounds… I can understand Justin's fears and worries, but he's not exactly so innocent!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2016 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 26

I can understand why Justin is afraid. I hope everything will be alright. 

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