Reviews For The Intruder
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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 29

Again, such a funny scene with those painted nails… “My usual strong front to the sight of his tears had dissolved no thanks to my rampant hormones” – his usual strong front? Haha… as if!

“He still couldn’t believe how I’ve changed over the years, and truthfully, I couldn’t either.” – That’s why I love your story so much… You have given them the chance to be so happy but also – in my opinion –  let them stay in character! Thanks!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2016 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 29

I love Brian on a mission. 

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