Reviews For The Intruder
Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2021 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 32
Date: Nov 15, 2021 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 32
The first time reading this I needed those tissues... How could you put such a beautiful and such a heartbreaking scene in one chapter... the second time reading it, I couldn't give you a review because I had to keep reading. The third time reading it, it's still heartbreaking and frightening. Poor Munchkin! I want to hug him so badly... and Brian's not a freak... "Between sobs, Munchkin explained I was special and had his sister in me"
Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
Date: Oct 31, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh no. That is way too soon. I really thought Brian would have learned his lesson after the last time.
Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed 
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Date: Oct 12, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
Now I know for a fact that Peanut makes it. Did you have to scare us like this? Well, yes you did. It makes for one hell of a story.