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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 14

I'm glad they are all okay. That could have ended badly. 

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Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 12

Poor Brian. All these changes must be exhausting. 

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Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 10

That pizza sounds absolutely gross. I love Justin's emails. It's really interesting. 

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Date: Oct 30, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh no. I hope everything is going to be fine. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

I can totally understand Brian. That kind of weight gain would freak me out too. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

He said yes. Now I wonder if they will get married right away or wait until Brian has his figure back. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

He said the three words. Yes...

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can just imagine Brian reacting to the chubby comment. Hilarious. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm really glad Justin is back. I hope the two of them can make it work. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Brian having a baby. That's just too funny. I can't wait for the queen outs. 

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:13 am Title: Outtake 9 pt. 3

Amazing great story looking forward to your next one.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 32

Now I know for a fact that Peanut makes it.  Did you have to scare us like this?  Well, yes you did.  It makes for one hell of a story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 31

Munchkin really likes messing with his parents.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 30

Poor Munchkin.  He'll get over having a sista sort of.  Enjoyed immensely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

You start out with sex and end up with milk?  LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 12

Munchkin always has to have the last word.  Poor Brian.  Tits?!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 11

Brian fat?  Not in this life.  Having Gus around makes things interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 10

Brian seems to be handling things well.  At least better than Justin.  But that pizza?  I dare you to make it and let us know how it came out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 9

And a beautiful friendship begins.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh no!!! I hope everything is okay.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Poor Brian, I can relate.  It is hard to get off the floor.  As much as I like Munchkin, I still love Peanut.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ouch that last part hurt.  Love the memo's, Justin has a sense of humor. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love the proposal, and yes it did sound familiar.  What a surprise their getting married will be for everyone.  I imagine Mel won't take their being late too well.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2016 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm cheating; I'm reading once more the whole story on the old site. I hope you didn't change anything major.

Couldn't wait for the updates on the new site.

This is so gooooood and so fun!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love how Brian has developed an attachment to his peanut.  When do we get to find out if Peanut is a he or a she?  With Justin's hand problems I think his painting will hit a block.  They're going to have to hire people, especially if they want to paint the whole house.

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