[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2022 4:40 pm Title: A Shocking Discovery
So Justin didn't know about the money but now he can get some answers about his life after the bashing while Seth was drugging him to get control of his money so he could leave Justin to fend for himself.
Karma did come for Seth and he doesn't deserve to be mourn.
Ben will be playing close attention to his little brother and their new guest he wants to know more about the blond his brother can't seem to move on from.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2020 6:48 pm Title: A Shocking Discovery
Blood had never tasted so good. I didn't want to stop. Maybe Justin's blood is like heroin... I did love the shudder of revulsion Brian felt about having feelings... he just isn't getting it. But so Brian Kinney-ish.
I'm curious how Seth got the documents about the inheritance. He had simply told Brian he overheard a conversation... So, was the conversation between Justin and the attorney in the hospital, and is that how Seth intercepted the documentation? Had the attorney left it there with Justin? It just seems a strange place for an attorney to visit and reveal that.
Now, this relative has me curious, especially since Justin doesn't recognize the name, which tells me it's probably not a grandparent. And MAYBE this relative has a connection that only him and Justin share... a power of sorts, that's making it impossible for Brian to compel or probe. So maybe if Ben catches Justin unaware, he can seek that reason out.
I absolutely loved this: Fucking clairvoyant freak. LOL... That was classic!
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
There is definitely a reason why Justin's blood tastes so good to Brian. And, we'll find that out very soon. :)
We certainly have a lot to explore here in regards to Justin's past. Perhaps when we do, or we meet the attorney, Seth's part will be revealed. And yes, Justin's relative is a special connection, one I hope I can begin to explore soon.
Haha. I'm glad you liked that line. I thought it would fit here - LOL.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2020 9:12 am Title: A Shocking Discovery
I thought I was smart enough not to read uncompleted stories, but here we go again
I'm fascinated and can't wait for the next chapter
this is a really nice supernatural QAF fic, it manages to tell the fantasy stuff not forgetting about great text and character development
I also like how both here and in "in the viewfinder" Ben plays an important part in the story unlike other cast regulars. Ben is cool and deserves it
Author's Response:
I am hoping to have another chapter finished by the end of the weekend. It's been slow going, but I always finish my stories. I have many completed stories to upload to this site. I am doing them one at a time. I do agree that Ben deserves a primary role. Another story that I just started posting, 'My Bodyguard' has him like that too. Many of my stories gives him a featured part.
More to come as soon as I can. Thanks so much for commenting. :)
Date: Jun 20, 2020 2:25 pm Title: A Shocking Discovery
Poor Justin... And yet, NOT. Somehow, I think he'll grow stronger from his experience with Seth.
As for Brian and Ben's puzzlement on why Brian cannot seem to compel Justin, I'm thinking there is something information about that locked away into Justin's memories, including just who the relative is. Perhaps Justin can get his inheritance earlier, and begin to rediscover himself, even as Brian and Ben try to figure him out.
I don't know but there are so MANY thoughts and possibilities running through my head right now! Can't wait for all of this to unfold!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS, Janet!!!
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Yes, you are definitely right. There are so many possibilities and avenues this story could take. I think it will start to come together soon as I don't plan on this being one of my 'War and Peace' stories on length. LOL.
I guess first we'll see what Ben's take is on Justin once they meet face to face. Ben is extremely gifted in ways that Brian is not... so, he could figure something out. Only time will tell. But for sure, the relative that Justin doesn't seemingly have any knowledge of could be significant. :)
Thanks for reading and your support, Chelle. I appreciate that so very much.
Hugs,
Janet