Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2021 11:05 am Title: Chapter 18

When Brian was on his, ‘think, Justin, think’ pitch, I wanted to shake Justin, saying, ‘Ethan you fool. The little pest!” But Justin finally got it together. So, widdle Ian has to go bye, bye, and doesn’t get to spend the money that Brandon gave him.

I’m kind of surprised that Sap only has two hitmen in his group. You would think an organization in a territory would require a dozen of them.

And Brian seems to be doing and more accepting with Caletti as his father.

HUGS,

Cathy

Author's Response:

Justin got a bit scattered for a moment. This is a big moment being observed by the infamous 'Surgeon.' LOL. He pulled it all together in time. 

I think after the Sap fled to the Virgin Islands to set up business he wasn't expecting any Caletti opposition. He thought his standard fear tactics would be enough. I guess he thought wrong. 

Brian and Salvatore should build a new relationship, one that Brian probably never thought he could have. A father than truly loves him.

Thanks for commenting!

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Reviewer: SaKha Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2020 12:44 am Title: Chapter 18

this story is so cool
my only complain is it's not finished yet and the chapters are short :( but I stayed up till 4 am reading this and I have no regrets

Author's Response:

The story is actually finished; although, I am planning on adding a few chapters to extend it. I hope to post more later today. I just have limited time on workdays as an essential worker. Typically, I write 3000 or under chapters. It enables me to update more quickly.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! :)