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Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:05 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8

Great ending. I’m glad Charles was so centered on Justin and his need for him, that his mind wasn’t able to probe Brian’s, and not realize what was happening until it was too late.

Now once they are back in Pittsburgh, Brian will have some powers if he should ever choose to ‘play’. You know, in case he runs into Kip or some other menace.

HUGS,

Cathy  😜



Author's Response:

This is what happened when I decided to watch Gale in The Secret Circle, I just had to merge the worlds. Lol. It was fun. I love writing the darker stories, and Charles is very intriguing. Of course Brian had to come out on top - in more ways than one! LOL. 

Thanks for reading and all of your insightful comments. They are much appreciated!

Hugs,

Janet



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:04 pm · Chapter: Chapter 7

I’m sure this will all go according to plan, but just so Justin remains safe, and Charles can’t do any harm with his mind control before the transference starts.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 3:35 pm · Chapter: Chapter 6

Jane must have transferred the crystal to him. And by Brian taking Justin in the bathroom, he must have cleared the pain from Justin’s head. But I have to wonder if this whole episode will make Brian a little more open to his feelings for Justin.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 1:13 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5

The moment Charles erased Ian from existence, I was waiting for the confusion of Justin wondering what they had been talking about. Although, I wasn't sure if it would just be Justin, or everybody. I'm assuming it has to be everybody - outside of Brian. Because otherwise you'd have school and parents, friends, etc... all looking for him.

And Brian was very accurate about that making it easier for him to get Justin to go with him.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 12:44 pm · Chapter: Chapter 4

Didn’t Mikey say - the fiddler fell off the roof? How poetic. Oh well, no huge loss. But I really hope Justin goes with Brian. Because earlier that was the only scenario I could see happening that Justin would be out of reach for Charles. And by the time Charles gets a plane back to Chance Harbor, hopefully, things will be close to getting rid of Charles.

If Justin asks why the different last names, I wonder how Brian will explain that.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 11:29 am · Chapter: Chapter 3

Well, well… is Liberty Avenue ready for two Brian Kinneys? LOL

If Charles can make Justin forget Brian simply by kissing him, that could be bad. Although Brian would have the chance to start over.

But I wonder if Brian got a hold of a crystal, if he could combat Charles then. But in the meantime, Brian better start telling everyone about his family secret so they can ignore Charles - but not sure that would help. If I was Brian, I think I would bring Justin to Chance Harbor with me… get him away from Charles.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 11:22 am · Chapter: Chapter 2

So Charles can inhabit minds and dreams. I’m not concerned about his threats for Ethan - he needs to go away anyway - although it could be fun watching him try to fight and argue with Charles, never believing he isn’t Brian coming to reclaim what Ethan thinks as his.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2021 11:21 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh man. Can Charles actually change his attitude to sound and appear to be Brian? Because if Justin THOUGHT that was Brian, Charles might have an easier chance of getting him.

HUGS,

Cathy



Name: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: Jun 28, 2020 9:39 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8

Good story

 

 

lah



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it! 



Name: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: Jun 28, 2020 4:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8
Oh my! I loved this! I thoroughly enjoyed The Secret Circle when I watched it. The evil sexiness of Charles Meade. Now to have Brian against Charles in a fight for Justin? Thrilling! You did a splendid job writing this. Kudoes!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this dark story. I had written this back at the time we first met Charles on The Secret Circle. I doubt some of the characters and details would have been so fresh in my mind now. 

Thanks for ready and the encouraging comment. I truly appreciate that! :) 



Name: coleamber (Signed) · Date: Jun 28, 2020 3:59 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8

good one



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment. :) 



Name: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2020 9:44 am · Chapter: Chapter 2

Argh I dislike Charles so much 



Author's Response:

Charles makes Ethan and Michael almost likeable - LOL. There are only 6 chapters in this story, so his reign of terror isn't forever - thankfully.

Thanks for commenting! :)



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