[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2022 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
A great alternate storyline... Of course Daphne would be happy, lol. She never liked Ethan (and most of us too). Mr. Cheeseball LOL I'm glad Brian realized who was behind the strokes of good luck... :)
Date: Apr 16, 2021 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great story!! I loved seeing Michael and Lindsay pretty much losing everything!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2020 12:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Lorie Great ending everyone got what they deserved. â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2020 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
So glad you continued the story. Absolutely wonderful. And, really if you think we need to know about the married life of the Taylor-Kinneys, we will be willing to read it. A good story is hard to end. Fantastic writing.
Date: Jul 22, 2020 8:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Thank you Lorie no problem !
Date: Jul 21, 2020 9:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay I love me some Lindsay and Michael getting their butts kicked. Loved the ending. Thank you for sharing your words with us.
...but what happened to Ben, did I miss something?
bec
Author's Response:
Bec,
Since this story was originally going to be just a one shot I hadn't planned on involving most of the rest of them. Then I got requests to continue and those two were being so annoying to the boys that Ben kind of got forgotten.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 21, 2020 7:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Hi Lorie, what does SMH mean, please !
Author's Response:
Marie-France,
SMH means Shaking My Head.
Sorry, sometimes I forget that not everyone understands American abbreviations.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a wonderful ending. Lindsay and Michael got what they deserved which is nothing. Gus now has three parents and two grandmothers. I'm sure he is happy.
Author's Response:
Phyllis,
Thank you. Gus is with the people that love him for what he is and not as a weapon and a pawn, it's what every child deserves.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
An excellent 3rd and final chapter from you. Although, no suprises there as you're an excellent writer. As usual you provide super smackdowns for the 2 morons in Brians life!!
Thanks hun,
Deb L
Author's Response:
Deb,
Thank you. Those two need to be put in their place. They think they own Brian and should be consulted and have final say in everything he says and does.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 11:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Lol thank you so much for the closure chapter
Author's Response:
Chris,
You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed the story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought there was no way you could wrap this story up with just one more chapter, but so happy to be proved wrong. 3 chapters and voila - total satisfaction. Loved this story, and thwarting Michael and Lindsay's lame ass attempts to control Brian was a lovely added bonus :-)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 8:59 am Title: Chapter 3
Great story thank you! There are some who will never learn but it is our pleasure.
Author's Response:
Marie-France,
Thank you. As long as our boys are happy and together everything is good.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 8:32 am Title: Chapter 3
So sorry to see this end....... But I loved it though fab story.
Author's Response:
Sharon,
Thanks. It was fun to write this one. I love when Brian's 'owners' get the Karma they deserve.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 4:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Absolutely love it!!! Thank you...
Author's Response:
Becky,
Thanks. You were right, it did need a third chapter.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 4:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to Chapter 3
Author's Response:
Becky,
I just posted it. Go read.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 4:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to Chapter 3
Date: Jul 16, 2020 3:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Please continue the story...
Author's Response:
Becky,
Okay, one last chapter to show everyone else's reaction to the couple.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2020 7:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Lorie enjoyed the ending especially Michael's "constipated fish" look and how he took care of Ethan. Keep up the good work love your stories.
Author's Response:
Lorna,
Thanks. I'm glad I finally managed to write something. It's been difficult these past several months.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 14, 2020 9:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw loved it and it had a smacked down Mikey as well lol
Author's Response:
Chris,
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story. Michael needs and deserves all the smackdowns he gets.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 13, 2020 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Maybe Michael and the fiddler can commiserate their losses together. Chin Rat his violin, Michael his bank.
Bravo Brian, took you long enough to put that weasel in his place. If Justin's still working at the diner, I'd be careful what I order if I were Michael. Ha!
Author's Response:
Sherry,
Both of them got what they deserved. I can't imagine if the weasel and the chin-rat ever got together, one whining and the other sounding like he was torturing a cat. Although, locking them together in a sound-proof room, so no one would have to listen but the two of them, sounds like a great idea.
Even though Justin would probably like to add to the weasel's food he has too much class, but he probably would say something to make him wonder, just to fuck with him.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha! At least Mikey knows the truth. Great chapter.
Phyllis, Yes, the weasel now knows that he will never have his fantasy come true, and he will never be able to come between Liberty Avenue's royal couple. He probably shook his head and cried all the way home. ~Lorie
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful way of getting them together. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Absolutely loved this story. Always happy to see the back of the fiddler, especially if it means Brian has his Sunshine back. Really liked that our boys were finally open and honest with each other, and that Michael was shown the door once and for all. Could happily read much more involving these new and improved Brian and Justin.
Author's Response:
Nicky,
I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It felt good to have Ethan ruin the thing he cherished most, since he tried to ruin the person that Brian loves. And the weasel got what he deserved, being shown that he is not Brian's best friend and that he will never get what he wants because Brian is with the only man he truly loves.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for this second chapter. It was so nice to see Ethan lose everything. Brian should have hit Michael for what he did to Justin but good to hear Brian say that he had let Justin top him was also a nice punishment for the whiny.
Author's Response:
Marie-France
I realized that it would be great to see Ethan and Michael get what they deserved. Brian saying what he said to Michael hurt him worse than punching him would have done. It showed him that he has no chance of ever having Brian for himself.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 1:31 am Title: Chapter 2
I really loved this story. Ethan got a shock and whiney boy an even bigger one! I wish Brian had punched him though for attacking Justin, cos he seriously deserved it.
Thanks hun, always a pleasure to read your stories.
Deb L.
PS Have you heard from Star lately, as she hasn't posted for ages? Just a bit worried about her is all.
Author's Response:
Deb,
Thank you. The only reason Brian didn't hit the chin-rat was that he had promised Justin. But him tripping and smashing his beloved violin was probably worse. Those things are expensive. Glad you enjoyed the story.
~Lorie
I heard from Star about a month ago. She has been really busy at work and hasn't had the time or motivation lately to write. I'm hoping she is able to get back to it soon.
<3