[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2022 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
A great alternate storyline... Of course Daphne would be happy, lol. She never liked Ethan (and most of us too). Mr. Cheeseball LOL I'm glad Brian realized who was behind the strokes of good luck... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought there was no way you could wrap this story up with just one more chapter, but so happy to be proved wrong. 3 chapters and voila - total satisfaction. Loved this story, and thwarting Michael and Lindsay's lame ass attempts to control Brian was a lovely added bonus :-)
Date: Jul 20, 2020 4:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to Chapter 3
Author's Response:
Becky,
I just posted it. Go read.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 20, 2020 4:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to Chapter 3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2020 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful way of getting them together. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2020 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is the correct ending....Thank you
Author's Response:
Judy,
Thanks. Glad you like it this way better.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 12, 2020 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
liked this reunion. If I were Brian, I'd still find a way for the fiddler's finger to accidently get broken. Or, maybe his precious violin. Something he holds as dear as Brian does Justin.
Sherry, You never know. It might just happen. ~Lorie
Author's Response:
Date: Jul 12, 2020 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
so what about a part 2 putting ethan back in his place in the gutter and then dear old whiny jealous asshole mikey throwing a temper tantrum and finding himself out on his ass, alone and the joke he's always been?
Author's Response:
Loriblair,
Actually I am thinking about possibly adding a second chapter. Sometimes you just have to show people where they belong.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2020 7:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed your story so much. It was true that it was an ideal time to meet again. And Brian who admits having a boyfriend Daphne can only jump for joy and me too. Thank you
Author's Response:
Marie-France,
Thank you. Brian left the door open for a reason. Justin just needed to pay attention. Brian being sweet to Daphne always left her tongue-tied.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2020 2:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Never liked Ethan, but it was an addition to the plot. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
Marilynne,
Thank you. I couldn't stand Ethan and I really could see him doing something like that if he got really pissed off.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 12, 2020 1:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Love your stories...as always!!
Author's Response:
Becky,
Thanks. I finally got something posted. I am writing other stuff too, but it's not finished yet.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 12, 2020 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it..... that's what should have happened
Author's Response:
Sharon,
Definitely. Brian left the door open for a reason.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 12, 2020 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Very good and as it should have been!! Thanks for the great writing.
Liz
Author's Response:
Liz,
Thanks. I didn't like the way they did it. Justin should have known that he wanted him back when he left the door open.
~Lorie