[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2020 6:13 am Title: Chapter 8
Aha, got the three read tonight... excellent! Although, I must say you didn't quite catch the sarcasm I meant on my last review how it was the 'money' Justin couldn't refuse... LOL... if inserting 'Brian' where 'money' was mentioned... yeah, he could do lots with Brian... besides, who needs money, if you have 'the man'? LOL, right?
But I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's been many years since reading it... a refresher is always nice.
And my oh my, what is little Ethan going to do now? No job, no money, and kicked out onto the street? Couldn't happen to a nicer guy! And then wanting Justin to go through with it? Money-grubbing slime! (Can you tell he's not my most favorite person?)
Gotta love this: When I'm finished I'll do it again and again until this fever you have instilled in me has dissipated."
Good luck with that, Mr. Kinney... if you think a night, or a weekend, is going to dissapate the fever... yep, good luck with that.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
I had a bit of time yesterday so I was able to post three chapters. :) It's taking me a long time to upload my stories here because I am actually taking the time to read over the chapters and change a word here and there. I guess in my mind, making it more fresh.
I must have been out of it to miss the sarcasm in your last review. As sarcastic as I am, that's just not me! LOL.
I'm glad you are enjoying a second look at this story. I really did have fun writing it way back then. It wasn't one of my angst-fests, but had a lot of steamy action that I thought befit the premise, and definitely IC with Brian and Justin.
And yes, I agree about Ethan. He is despicable. I never know which character I dislike the most between Michael and Ethan. At least, Michael isn't a problem in this story. Haha. And don't get me started on Lindsey. Those are my top three anti-characters. LOL.
Another chapter is posted now. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.
Hugs,
Janet