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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2020 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 11

Well, a little developement... yeah... although, I think if Mr. Kinney knew how it was the hustler that tipped Ian off, he might be a tad bit angry at said man.

And the cocky fool that Ethan is, he doesn't realize when you play with fire, you WILL get burned.

His thoughts of: With Justin loyal by his side he didn't need to fret about survival until he landed his big break. He would be cared for until then. At that point, if Justin had still proven to be unworthy of him - then he would sever their ties completely.

LOLOLOLOL... I can't quit laughing... Ian should have felt honored that Justin even agreed to marry him in the first place... and all Ethan was doing was using him. Well, he better push all thoughts of marrying Justin out of his head... that is NOT who Justin will marry! Ian will not win...

I just thought of a humorous scenario - Maybe Ian could offer himself to Mr. Kinney for money ... LOL... I know, I know... the story is written, but gosh, that could have been funny...

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, we will se a little development from this point. And... the weekend does have to end at some point - LOL. This story was designed for a lot of steamy action in keeping with the actual premise, but for sure, some plot to flesh out yet. 

No matter what methods Brian employed here, I do think he did Justin a favor in extricating Ethan from his life. Ethan is totally despicable here. 

That is an entertaining thought for sure. I think Brian's disdain would reach new levels! LOL.

More to come soon. I am hoping to get the rest posted quickly, then I can move onto another. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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