Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2020 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

I saw your reply to my review, and yes that was for chapter 2. I think I'm stretching myself too thin these days. Helping six newer writers, and still issuing out BBM stories through Find it here. And what don't have, I'm copying. I can't believe how many have friend-locked their journals over the years. ANYWAY...

Did Brian even bring lube and condoms? I know the motto, 'Always be prepared'... but come on, this is a monastery! Why be prepared with the old geezers? LOL...

Brian thought his room with the drab brown furniture probably looked the same as all the others... yet, I highly doubt the others have a sofa, recliner, table and chairs, and other kitchen amenities. Non-padded or not, he does has kitchen chairs.

I'm almost surprised Brian didn't insist on the 'lessons' to be in his 'suite' of rooms, because how else will he get him in that twin-sized bed? Although, if your story is rated E - maybe he doesn't?

And I think Father Brian will find his pupil, Seminarian Taylor, to be a lot more willing than his first impression. Haha!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

It sounds like you have more than enough on your plate! I know how that is between working, two teenagers that are back in school - which is certainly another worry these days, and writing when I can cram in a moment or two. And, of course, I'm not just working on uploading older stories here, but my vampire story, and another in the background too. It never ends. LOL.

I think we know that Brian will always be prepared just in the case that he found someone that he didn't view as a 'dickless' breed. Haha. 

I'm sure Brian would have liked the idea of his rooms, but without a doubt, the Abbot wouldn't sanction that. Lol. And the rating was wrong, but now fixed. This is me, remember? This story couldn't ever be for everyone. Haha. I had noticed that when posting a chapter, but forgot to go back and change it. Undoubtedly, we will get to a point where it would have required it, which won't be too much longer since this story only has 10 chapters in all. 

More of this to come soon. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Hugs,

Janet