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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2020 10:22 am Title: Chapter 4

Oooh... Mr. Kinney is already on the prowl... He certainly didn't waste any time. And I would be curious if anyone else caught the 'HOT'... There must be eyes watching.

And what's better than hair that looks like you just crawled out of bed?

Jennifer seems demure in this story. Not an overly strong personality.

Lastly, you described the routine with very good clarity. It was easy to visualize.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian never takes a breath when his hunter instincts kick in. Lol. 

I am going to assume no one else saw Brian's 'hot' reference since the angle would probably make it only the other judges that could see him. We will assume they didn't. 

Regarding Jennifer, yes I can see your point. I have probably only written her as a deep character in a few of my stories, and considering how many I have written, that's not very many. I'm not sure what it is exactly. I don't think I really connect with her character, which is odd being a mother myself. I do like her for the most part, but spending a lot of time creating depth for her just doesn't seem to work for me. Oh well. Lol. 

I'm glad you liked the routine. Loving figure skating as I do, I really enjoyed writing that part.

Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

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