[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2020 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
It was a necessary evil, so I guess I had to put up with 3,400 words of Justin losing his virginity... (I'm kidding.)
So... This was supposed to take the edge off; make it so he could place his hands on him during training and not want to hustle him into the nearest corner to fuck him senseless. SEE? Just like Lay's ... bet you can't just have one!
And this section really summed Brian up in this chapter: His intentions were more than clear. Seek. Devour. Possess.
And Craig Taylor? Maybe we should send a lynch mob in after him...
I hadn't remembered that the coach was doing this for money for his wife and daughter, so that kind of explains his rationale behind doing this... but what he really needs to consider, is it okay to incapitate a healthy nineteen year old, for his terminally ill wife?
And how could Craig make it so he never trained another skater? I would think that when word got out what Craig wanted him to do, by not caving to his threats, it would help his chances of getting skaters under his wing. Because this way, if it gets out what he was willing to do to a skater he was training, his career is ruined... and after his wife dies? How will he support his daughter?
And secrets always have a way of getting out.
Author's Response:
Brian was a bit delusional to have even an inkling of hope that the one time would be enough to take the edge off since he already accepted, if only in his own mind, that Justin is very different than anyone else. If anything, his desire will probably only be more intensified... but he had to discover that himself.
I don't see the coach is a really bad guy here. He is doing something very wrong, but in his situation, he believes for the right reasons. I suppose in his sad circumstances, he wants to do everything he can for his wife/family, and Craig knew precisely how to prey on that. In his desperation, I can visualize how someone as twisted as Craig is portrayed here could easily manipulate the coach into believing he had the power to do anything. And, the coach probably wouldn't want his part in this despicable plan revealed. I know I certainly wouldn't!
And for sure, secrets tend to come out. As they undoubtedly will here too.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy. More to be posted as soon as I get another minute or two - LOL.