Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2020 2:05 am Title: Chapter 7

Why do I get the feeling that Brandon is just going to get started? That his pursuit and hunt has just tipped over the edge and gone in the manic mode? Obsessive control. *shiver*

And I'm trying to figure out if Brian's talking to him was really a good thing. It might quiet Brandon for a day or two, but he'll come back with a vengence. Consequences be damned. I wish Brian would have hired Justin a bodyguard.

And why, with the ending, Tonight, Justin Taylor, we will move forward. I'm going to seduce you... I now have this Shirelles song playing on loop in my head?

Tonight you're mine completely - You give your love so sweetly - Tonight the light of love is in your eyes - But will you love me tomorrow?

Thanks so much for that. LOL... It won't quit.

Hugs  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Sadly you are probably right. Brandon is a definite problem in this story. He might even make the 'Sap' look good! If that's possible!!

Good point, but I think Brian wanted Brandon to be very aware that Justin wasn't alone and unprotected. I can't imagine it's Brian intention that Justin will be out of his sight...but we'll see how that goes. 

Haha. That's a good one. I don't know if that would be in Brian's seduction manual, but he's breaking his rules in leaps and bounds with Justin here. 

Thanks for comment, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2020 2:41 am Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter.  Fantastic writing.  Love this story, but not Brandon.  Happy Holidays to you.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this story, and yeah, very bad Brandon here! Happy Holidays!

Thanks for commenting.