[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2020 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
This chapter was most interesting. You got Mikey down pat. Somehow I think Bent will end up a Rage character if Justin has anything to say about it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a comment, Phyllis :) I suspect you're right about Bent and a certain blond's superpowers.
~ Karynn, aka eureka1
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2020 10:08 am Title: Chapter 2
A HUGE SHOUT-OUT FOR THE BANNER! I wish I had me one with no writing on it!
Author's Response:
Yay, thanks for the banner love! <3 And your wish has been fulfilled!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2020 10:06 am Title: Chapter 2
I just have to say if anyone comes back with yucky things about that video, I'm going to hide my head in the snow.
Well, you had me in stitches a few different places. But if those were the Halloween decorations you invisioned for the diner, I feel sorry for poor Violet. Please don't scare the kitty!
Me thinks - the more Brian growls "Hand's off, Honeycutt," the more Emmett's going to egg him on, and get more touchy-feely And what's this with you and orange? I'd almost think that was your least favorite color.
Ted and Blake having sex while doing a handstand. (hmm, gotta wonder if Brian will see if that really works.) But when Mel challenged: "I'll believe it when I see it," ... I would have loved for Ted to say: "Sure Mel, come over anytime and watch us have sex. What day works best for you?" Ah, poor Lindsay would have jeered and stormed out. But I was confused on that part where Lindsay stared in seeming fascination at the Formica table top. Because Michael had just commented it wouldn't be enough to get him to do the guy... Hmm... Whatever...
I never get tired of Michael's denseness and clueness. It's SO fitting. But I would have thought he'd jump at featuring a character such as a contorionist - it would kind of be like the Elongated Man in Flash. And if it's good enough for FLASH, Mikey should have ran with it.
But I think the best part of this was when Mikey realized even BEN had a go at Gumby. Contortion Boy was wrapped around you like a limpet, his ankles around that thick neck of yours. LMAO! But the ‘Holy Spider! sex'? Thanks for the visual. It made me almost throw up! Mikey is someone I don't compute with hot sex. Sure the professor is hot, but gosh darn, Mikey is LACKING!!!!
Whipping Wexler. Oh yes, Brian, Ted is VERY well acquainted with Dale - and his whip!
Very good second chapter. And looking forward to the finale.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Good news. You didn't have to give yourself brain freeze by hiding your head in the snow :D :D
I'm glad I could put you in stitches more than once. Those hissing black kitties were getting their revenge on the horrible humans who even thought of mistreating them (or any of their less beautiful cousins).
A bright orange should look good on Brian, especially if he still has a bit of a summer tan. He's just gotten into the habit of associating the color with Emmett. He acknowledges (only to himself) that the other man has style, but he doesn't think he can carry off the same hues and styles. He should remember they're both tall :D :D
You may be on to something with your thoughts about why Linds was staring at the Formica table top. I won't say any more than that, or you'll need brain bleach. (I'm feeling kind, lolol, especially since I hit you with another brain bleach moment in this chapter.)
By now, you'll have seen how Michael's thoughts about Bent will change... and know how that comes about.
Thanks for your detailed comments, Cathy :) You know how much I appreciate it.
Hugs back atcha,
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2020 9:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Excellent!!!! I love when Michael doesn't get his way.
A few sentences that I love :
"The follicles on Brian's skin pebbled as Justin's breath ghosted across the fine hairs on his neck. Those hairs weren't the only thing to stand on end, a jolt of arousal coursing through Brian."
"A couple beats later, from the other side of the wall, long, slender fingers met his. Each of them had gripped the other's hand tightly, their grunts becoming louder as they fucked, the tricks largely forgotten."
This one was a surprise; Ted is full of wilderness:"We had a threesome," Blake disclosed."
Author's Response:
I'll take that "Excellent!!!!" <3 Thank you, Claire.
Thanks also for sharing some of the bits you liked best; you know how much I appreciate that. :) That moment in Woody's is also one of my favorites from the chapter. Well, okay, I like all three of the ones you quoted (duh), but that one is extra special.
Ted and Blake know how to pull off a surprise :D
~ Karynn, aka eureka1
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2020 3:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Wonderful chapter. Fantastic writing. I recognize the Pittsburgese as we call it here where I live about 30 miles from the Pitts. In addition to Yinz we have Younz, but one of my all time favorites is "jeet" which translated means "did you eat" and the Pgh. answer is no "ju" which is "no did you". Just a little trivia for you. Love the story. Happy Halloween to you.
Author's Response:
Uh-oh. You've told me you live near Pittsburgh. That means I can hit you up for advice in the future :D
Thank you for sharing some of your favorite Yinzer-speak :) You can bet those'll show up in my stories :)
Your comments are much appreciated, as always. Happy Halloween - just a tad belated - to you.
~ Karynn, aka eureka1