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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2021 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well worth the wait.  I was so excited to see a new chapter.  Your characters are so vivid and jump off the pages of the story.  I can jsut see the reunion with Ezra and his parents and can really visualize Mason too.  The pain is so raw with the characters too.  Great job.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying the new characters and feel like everyone is multi-dimensional. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! New chapter is now up!

Reviewer: Sksfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2021 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Anxiously awaiting more

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2020 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was gut-wrenching...so many tears. My heart goes out to all of them. This is gonna be so hard...but beautifully written! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Starting this story off with Emmett is s stroke of genius.  Emmett is the only one who is able to eliciate empathy for what has occured.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I feel Emmett is very in touch with his emotions and those around him. He's a very empathetic POV to write and you will see more of his POV in this story. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2020 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I had a feeling we were heading for heartbreak but this was so much more than what I was expecting. Beyond sad for Emmett as he tries to be all things for all people, all while he deals with his own grief at the loss of his good friend and tries to be strong for Brian. I see tough times ahead. So beautifully written but also so sad. I just know I am going to be impatient awaiting each new chapter in this brilliant series.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I am glad I wrote Ted getting Emmett to open up. Emmett has to be going on a emotional rollercoaster of his own with trying to keep everything smooth and informing everyone of such a devastating loss. :( Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2020 1:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg! I never expected this. This is so heartbreaking, but sooo good. A wonderful job writing.

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you are enjoying it, even if it is heartbreaking! Thanks for reading!

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