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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2020 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

Omg I cannot over the audicity of Louisa! Sweet baby Jesus, she has some nerve! Poor Brian...that was the last thing he needed. 

I'm so glad Justin was there for him but seriously, express your condolences already. 

Molly is THE BEST! 



Author's Response:

Louisa really needs to check herself and understand that this isn't how to be in Lily's life. Brian definitely didn't need that and we all know that Eric would have kicked her out if he was alive to hear what she said to him. Justin definitely needs to express his condolences, but I think he also knows that Brian hates being apologized to and is trying to find the right moment. Molly is awesome! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Chapter 9 is now up! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2020 4:56 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow.  Molly is a godsent.  Brian is coming back to be with Lily.



Author's Response:

Molly is wonderful :) Chapter 9 is now up! :)

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2020 2:05 am Title: Chapter 8

So, so good. My heart breaks for Brian and Lily. But you're writing so beautifully conveys what they are going thru. 



Author's Response:

They are going through so much right now :( It's good that they have each other, as well as Gus and their family, but it's still very hard fo them. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 8

Omg I am so engrossed in this story. Yay at least Brian allowed Justin to care for him a tiny bit today. I thought Louisa would try this custody angle. I hope Brian and Eric had her guardianship airtight.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are so into it! Brian let Justin help him a little. Definitely a good sign. He still has a long way to go and there are going to be good days and absolutely horrible ones, but hopefully he is going try to start healing a little. Louisa needs to step back and re-evaluate herself. She should play an important role in Lily's life but not if she's going to be like this. Chapter 9 is now up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great update.  It is tough, but each in their way is coming to terms with what happened.  How dare Louisa think she could take Lily from her father.  Was told once that if you want to bring out the worst in people, have a wedding or a funeral and have seen it happen many times.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Large family get togethers with a bunch of stress involved are the worst, so I can totally see funerals and weddings bringing out the worst in people. Louisa definitely needs to respect Brian if she wants to continue being in Lily's life. She is hurting and she feels immense guilt, but she can't go about it this way. Thanks for reading! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

You rock  Thank you

 

Teresa



Author's Response:

You rock too! Chapter 9 is now up!

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2020 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 8

You still keep churning out a great story. That so called grandma doesnt need to have Lily.

Author's Response:

No, she definitely doesn't. Should she play an important part in Lily's life? Yes, but only if she owns her mistakes and accepts that Brian is Lily's dad. Thanks for reading! Chapter 9 is now up!

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