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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2023 10:21 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

Justin slapped Brian when he really should have given Lindsay the slap she so richly deserved.

Brian is as straight as Lindsay thinks she is God's Gift he definitely needs to discover his true self so he can get away from Lindsay.

Sweet of Ron to give Briar a million dollars to spend on himself, love that Lindsay got nothing but the company which Ted will be running while her Highness sits on her flat ass, Justin getting everything else should be interesting.

Wonder what Lynette got?

How is Uncle George going to make sure all of Ronald's plans come into fruition?

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 10:14 pm Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

Maybe that smack will shake the gayness loose inside Brian.

I see no love lost between Lindsay and Ron. The dreams of her and all that money just flew out the window along with Michael's dream of all that money and Justin  too.

Bring in the reenforcements. they'er going to be needed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 7:34 pm Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

This is such fun.  Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:46 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

Woah! Did not expect Brian to get the 180* slap! And damn - the hair pull! I bet Lindsay thinks Brian's reaction is on her behalf! Fat chance! Love that Brian put Justin's hair in his handkerchief much to Lindsay's disgust!

Justin can certainly read Lindsay as the spoiled little rich bitch that she is. Gotta love Emmett telling Lindsay he wasn't afraid to slap her either! LOL!

Ohhh! Can't wait to see Daphne in action regarding Lindsay... and hopefully Michael, too! Maybe Lindsay will make that comment about her hair color being natural in front of Daphne, Emmett or even Justin and get her ass handed to her. LOL!

Ted can certainly shut Lindsay up.

Bravo, Ronald! Brian gets a million dollars and Lindsay can't touch it!!! Yay!!! So glad that Lindsay only gets her stock in the company and Justin gets the controlling stock and the rest of the estate! Ronald was a very smart man!

Really enjoyed the interaction between Brian and Emmett; that was sooo Emmett.

Poor widdle, greedy, Mikey is going to lose out on marrying a multi-millionaire. Maybe he can marry Lindsay? They seem pretty compatible.

Twallock! LOL! The perfect word to describe Mikey! *dries eyes from laughing*

Loving this! Can't wait for Chapter 3!!!

*Hugs*

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Deb! Daphne will certainly be schooling Lindsay and then some - if you think Cyn as an assistant was fierce, ooh boy! And as for the estate that Justin gets let's just say that Lindsay is going to be shrieking a lot louder when she finds out what else daddy got up to in her absence...and keep in the back of your mind, her very annoyed former attorney...

Oh speaking of Michael and Lindsay marrying...well that's another story.

Happy reading

Nicole [MissMerlot]

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:14 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

What a great chapter.  Love this story..  Great writing.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 3:07 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

First, thank you so much for the quick update to this story. You're spoiling us! (But I'll take it!)

Lots to consider here, and I have some questions...

Ted mentioned Vic and Deb... is Debbie still going to be Michael's mother? If that's the case, Justin must know them. So it's Brian that Ted wants them to meet?

Lindsay has shares in the company. So she's really not destitute. And even though the company is called 'Kinnetik', that was still Ronald's company?? And Brian has been possibly running it? So, will he run Kinnetik, but not own it? It's owned by the shareholders?

Now, my observations - I'm assuming Ronald knew of the pact Justin and Michael made about getting married, so the clause he put in about not marrying for five years, was to put a stop to any wedding bells between the two. This will also give Brian a chance to 'come to his senses' - and be able to get together with Justin. And aw shucks, Mikey can't marry Justn and get his greedy hand on the millions!

Brian can't spend his million on anything but 'HIMSELF' - so Lindsay can't finagle any money out of him.

Are they going to Woody's tonight? By the time Brian is hit on 50 times, he might start WISHING he was gay! LOL... And after Justin's nap, will he show up there too?

And where does Ben come in if Ted is arranging for Em to get together with Drew?

Looking forward to being spoiled SOON again!

Hugs,

Cathy ❤️



Author's Response:

Hiya...since this is your PB, I feel I should answer some of the questions raised, it won't be a spoiler but should make the story interesting.

Nope to Debs and Vic being mother and uncle - they're related to him, but not saying how yet.

Brian and Ronald never went into business...Kinnetic is all Brian's - the reason f r the bequest will be explained in the next chapter.

Yes to Ronald knowing and about the pact and he does want Brian to come to his senses...but he had other chaps in miind for Brian and Justin!

And that's all you're getting my friend.

Happy reading

MissMerlot [Nicole]

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2020 12:58 am Title: The Reading of the Riot Act and the Will

Brian not gay? Did I catch that right? Pigs do fly if so. Very different and oh so good. More soon please.>> Cat

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