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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2023 10:36 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Brian should stand up for himself against Lindsay more often it will flatten her totally bottle blonde hair to match her flat ass!

Daphne coming will tick Lindsay off since Daphne isn't afraid to tell her where to go and how fast together there lol

Vic being to help Brian in more than one way will hopefully get him away from Lindsay faster.

If anyone needed a swift kick to get backside it has to be Lindsay Peterson!!

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2021 4:34 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Like this a lot! Can't wait for the story to develop. Not sure about the 'Ted' one, but probably need a couple more chapters for it to develop.  As it is written by you, no doubt i will enjoy it too!

Thanks

Deb L. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2021 6:06 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Vic is a really, cool neat guy, and just what Brian needs - a protector in his corner. And it sounded like he had possibly worked for Ron, or knew Ron. Is that correct???

And with the arrival of Daphne, and with Vic there, I think any access Lindsay might have had to Brian, will now be blocked.

But I am curious about something...

They are staying in a ritzy hotel. Lindsay's using a limo, and bossing people like she's the queen, so how is it that she's paying for this? Now that the will has been read, how will Lindsay afford these luxuries? Where will she be staying? That house was her father's - correct? She can't afford to go back and have Manning as her butler. She has NO CLOUT - NO MONEY - to have these people at her beck and call.

And I thimk the sooner she gets that bucket of ice water called reality tossed on her the better. Like: Who do you think you are to order me around? She's a nobody. She can't afford to pay these people.

So she needs to get off her flat ass, find a job, and find someplace to live, just like Ronald had intended.

Huh - maybe Daphne will get to throw the bucket of ice water... LOL...

Hugs,

Cathy ❤️



Author's Response:

Hiya...not quite with Vic and Ronald; there's more to that relationship and it will come to light a litlte later. As for the hotel and limo, they have been provided by George. She thinks because it's her due but it's so that they can keep an eye her and Brian. If you mean her house etc in New York, thats hers, she got it from the money from Nancy's estate, so she's already wealthy, but is greedy and entitled...as per usual. 

Happy reading.

MissMerlot [Nicole]

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2021 4:16 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Vic is the driver?  How cool.  Getting to know Emmett and Ted will lead to Justin.  Shame Brian thinks he's straight.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2021 3:38 am Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

What a bitch Brian has to put up with. Bring on Mel to put her in her place.

Can't wait for Daphne to show up. Calvary to the rescue.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2021 8:47 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Great update.  Love this story and what a miserable witch Linds is.  Terrific writing

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2021 6:49 pm Title: A Glimpse of Her Darkness and His Fight

Gahhh Brian’s still straight. Not a complaint. Just so Ewwwwww since with Lindsey. Lol. Looking forward to more.

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