Woah. Now that's interesting. Glad to see Vic and Deb are aligning themselves with Brian and friends.
Crooked and crookeder! So there's someone else in the melee, besides Kip. Jerome? Justin apparently paid Jerome off - but for what?
It's good Mel got the contracts - that should slow them down.
I think when Debbie and Vic get those pictures to Brian, some shit is going to hit the fan!
Hopefully Mikey gets what's coming for him.
I can totally see the little girl as Daphne's! You did good!
It's a small world after all... Yep... funny how they are all coming together. One knows one, who knows another one...
And Michael, Lindsay, and Kip are GOING DOWN! I can hardly wait for the new, improved novel to hit the shelves exposing all the liars and thieves!
And Brian better NEVER be alone with scuzzy Kip. He might be drugged and used. *shudder*
Okay lets see if I have it right. Gus(Boo) and Daphne have a child,Phoebs? Ted and Mel are married and he wrote the book that Michael claims he wrote. Jaybay is Justin. Gamps is Brian. Kip works for Michael.
Hiya, yes Gus [Boo is her nickname for him] and Daphne have Pheebs - they are teen parents. Jaybay is Justin and Brian is a very proud and protective Gamps. Ted and Mel are not married - he has the socrching hots for Ben. Mel is Gus's mother in this - she had him with Brian - back story to come. Yes Ted wrote the book that Michael and Lindsay stole and Kip works for Michael. Hope that clears up things for you m'dear.
Shouldn't Michael have read the book he supposedly wrote?
That slimeball Kip works for Michael???!!! If I wasn't aware of it before, knowing this just made my repulsion escalate! And if they think whiny, insignificant Kip, can duplicate Theodore's literary words, well, the joke is on them.
Brian's - 'Tiny Thomas' - was that a dig on his 'size'? LOL
It appears that people are banding and bonding against Michael and Lindsay. All I can say is: LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!
This looks like an interesting story. Paticularly like that Michael and Lindsay are being set up from the start!
Looking forward to more.
Hello, chapter 3 is missing. Is there something wrong with the site?
thanks for update
I think Michael has dreams that are never going to come to light. He has lied to Drew, thus getting his money, but since he has aspirations of totally ruining him, well, he's going to come up against some pitbulls defending Drew, thus stopping him cold.
Michael wants the privilege of ramming Justin, well, that cold day in hell will never see the light of day.(Ugh! brain bleach please!)
He also thinks Brian isn't going to best him once again, so I'm looking forward to when Brian takes him down and ruins him finacially, but also gets the honor of Justin in his bed.
Yay, Ted and Ben... and Teddy has his own pitbull now.
Nasty Michael and Lindsay better look out when those pits strike!
Thanks for the update!
Love anf Hugs,
Michael is as wicked as I always thought. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Intriguing read and very different from anything I've read before in the QaF universe. Can hardly wait to see where you are taking us from here :-)
Great chapter. I love this story already. And you write Michael & Lindsay as nasty as they are. Fantastic writing.
First, I love Ben and Ted together. There's something sweet yet hot about it.
Not only is Michael going to lose, and, badly to Brian...again, but how is little whiney Mikey going to handle it when Brian and Justin get together?
Michael is going to try and ruin Drew's reputation? Not if Em has any say in the matter. Which I'm sure he will.
Poor Teddy. Payback's a bitch when your new friends get even. Can't wait.
Very interesting start
This is amazing! And I have a very strong feeling it will get even more amazing! Can't wait (I know I have to wait) to see this dish served ice cold! A great start!
This is going to be so good. You have the best imagination and ideas for stories.
So excited to go on this ride!! Thanks for giving us this new story!
Oh this is great. What a wonderful idea. Terrific writing as always.