[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2021 12:02 pm Title: More Manners and She Wonders
I dearly want to know what Leon has on Mikey too. Teddy is so nice to make those cookies with Pheebs.
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2021 1:43 pm Title: More Manners and She Wonders
Curious Dr and curiouser. What next? You have a conniving mind for punishing the entitled twosome.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2021 10:18 pm Title: Memories...From Last Night and A Saviour From School
Wow! Brian is overly protective of Gus... isn't he?
And Vic and Debbie are very altruistic in wanting to help protect Brian.
I laughed when Lindsay heard what Michael and Kip referred to her as... and that said... Michael and Kip... whre's the brain bleach????
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: Jun 11, 2021 3:44 pm Title: Opening the Door on Them...After They Closed the Door on Him
Loving this more with each chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2021 12:13 pm Title: Memories...From Last Night and A Saviour From School
So loving this! Be glad when Mike and Lindsey gets their comeuppance.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2021 12:13 pm Title: Memories...From Last Night and A Saviour From School
So loving this! Be glad when Mike and Lindsey gets their comeuppance.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2021 6:45 am Title: Memories...From Last Night and A Saviour From School
Woah. Now that's interesting. Glad to see Vic and Deb are aligning themselves with Brian and friends.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2021 10:12 pm Title: Two Ideas...One Good, One Bad and Help from the Past
Crooked and crookeder! So there's someone else in the melee, besides Kip. Jerome? Justin apparently paid Jerome off - but for what?
It's good Mel got the contracts - that should slow them down.
I think when Debbie and Vic get those pictures to Brian, some shit is going to hit the fan!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2021 7:50 am Title: Two Ideas...One Good, One Bad and Help from the Past
Mikey! Ugh! Lindsey is not any better! So Ted is a kid charmer! Cute. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. >>Cat
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2021 6:49 am Title: Two Ideas...One Good, One Bad and Help from the Past
Hopefully Mikey gets what's coming for him.
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2021 11:54 am Title: He Wants to do what and Knows Who
I can totally see the little girl as Daphne's! You did good!
It's a small world after all... Yep... funny how they are all coming together. One knows one, who knows another one...
And Michael, Lindsay, and Kip are GOING DOWN! I can hardly wait for the new, improved novel to hit the shelves exposing all the liars and thieves!
And Brian better NEVER be alone with scuzzy Kip. He might be drugged and used. *shudder*
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2021 8:47 am Title: He Wants to do what and Knows Who
Okay lets see if I have it right. Gus(Boo) and Daphne have a child,Phoebs? Ted and Mel are married and he wrote the book that Michael claims he wrote. Jaybay is Justin. Gamps is Brian. Kip works for Michael.
Author's Response:
Hiya, yes Gus [Boo is her nickname for him] and Daphne have Pheebs - they are teen parents. Jaybay is Justin and Brian is a very proud and protective Gamps. Ted and Mel are not married - he has the socrching hots for Ben. Mel is Gus's mother in this - she had him with Brian - back story to come. Yes Ted wrote the book that Michael and Lindsay stole and Kip works for Michael. Hope that clears up things for you m'dear.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2021 6:09 pm Title: He Wants to do what and Knows Who
Great story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2021 5:40 pm Title: Underselling, Undermining and Unnerving
Shouldn't Michael have read the book he supposedly wrote?
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2021 2:20 pm Title: Underselling, Undermining and Unnerving
That slimeball Kip works for Michael???!!! If I wasn't aware of it before, knowing this just made my repulsion escalate! And if they think whiny, insignificant Kip, can duplicate Theodore's literary words, well, the joke is on them.
Brian's - 'Tiny Thomas' - was that a dig on his 'size'? LOL
It appears that people are banding and bonding against Michael and Lindsay. All I can say is: LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2021 11:54 am Title: Underselling, Undermining and Unnerving
This looks like an interesting story. Paticularly like that Michael and Lindsay are being set up from the start!
Looking forward to more.
Thanks
Deb L.
Date: Mar 15, 2021 9:40 am Title: Underselling, Undermining and Unnerving
Hello, chapter 3 is missing. Is there something wrong with the site?
Date: Mar 15, 2021 3:51 am Title: Underselling, Undermining and Unnerving
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2021 5:16 am Title: More History and The Hunt Begins
I think Michael has dreams that are never going to come to light. He has lied to Drew, thus getting his money, but since he has aspirations of totally ruining him, well, he's going to come up against some pitbulls defending Drew, thus stopping him cold.
Michael wants the privilege of ramming Justin, well, that cold day in hell will never see the light of day.(Ugh! brain bleach please!)
He also thinks Brian isn't going to best him once again, so I'm looking forward to when Brian takes him down and ruins him finacially, but also gets the honor of Justin in his bed.
Yay, Ted and Ben... and Teddy has his own pitbull now.
Nasty Michael and Lindsay better look out when those pits strike!
Thanks for the update!
Love anf Hugs,
Cathy â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2021 3:49 pm Title: More History and The Hunt Begins
Michael is as wicked as I always thought. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2021 10:18 am Title: More History and The Hunt Begins
Intriguing read and very different from anything I've read before in the QaF universe. Can hardly wait to see where you are taking us from here :-)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2021 2:46 am Title: More History and The Hunt Begins
Great chapter. I love this story already. And you write Michael & Lindsay as nasty as they are. Fantastic writing.
Date: Feb 02, 2021 1:36 am Title: More History and The Hunt Begins
First, I love Ben and Ted together. There's something sweet yet hot about it.
Not only is Michael going to lose, and, badly to Brian...again, but how is little whiney Mikey going to handle it when Brian and Justin get together?
Michael is going to try and ruin Drew's reputation? Not if Em has any say in the matter. Which I'm sure he will.
Date: Feb 02, 2021 12:43 am Title: Opening the Door on Them...After They Closed the Door on Him
Poor Teddy. Payback's a bitch when your new friends get even. Can't wait.
Date: Jan 18, 2021 8:00 am Title: Opening the Door on Them...After They Closed the Door on Him
Very interesting start