Reviews For Hormonal Shift
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Reviewer: jayjaykmm Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2022 5:46 am Title: Chapter 2

Yikes. I hope they won't get back together again. That would cause a ton of other drama

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2021 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

Debbie sure does know how to make an entrance!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 4:12 am Title: Chapter 10

Ha ha ha, I love this:

“I’ll be sure to notify The Times,” Brian muttered to himself as he shook his head. “What the fuck did I just do?”

“Since my partner is the queen of PSA's and has a direct line to my doctor.”

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 3:34 am Title: Chapter 9

Ha ha ha: "she’s taken to Kinnetik like a condom to a dick"

Excellent!! Melanie would like that, for sure ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 3:19 am Title: Chapter 8

These 2 sentences got me a lump in the throat:

“And I’m just as in love with him but sometimes it frightens me. He loves so completely. Do you understand?”

“Yes, I do,” Brian whispered around the lump that just formed in his throat as he thought of a certain blond impatiently waiting for him at the loft.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 3:06 am Title: Chapter 7

I like how Justin is asking Brian for confirmation: "You do?".

After Michael's blowout and Brian's answer, Melanie will reconsider Brian's persona.

The plans for Kinnetik 2.0 seem interesting, even the new facade; I wasn't sure Brian will go for it.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 2:39 am Title: Chapter 6

The last chapter!!!

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Date: Apr 05, 2021 1:13 am Title: Chapter 5

I hope everything is going to be OK with Jacqueline.

B&J at Babylon: nostalgia...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2021 1:07 am Title: Chapter 4

Emmett and Justin : I always liked their relationship, and the fact that it makes Brian "jealous" is a bonus.

I was sad for Ashley, but it seems the crisis has ended with Bree.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm curious to see how Mel and Brian's relationship is going to evolve in this new context.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh no.  We haven't seen Deb in a while.  Shame since all the other drama was winding down.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

I suppose we are getting close to Gus' talk with his dad.  All for the best.  Mell has mellowed in her old age and understands her daughter better then JR's dad.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Gus needs to get things together asap.  Michael needs to talk to someone wearing a white coat before he alienates everyone.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

The jambalaya makes a reappearance.  And Michael is acting as ass.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 8:51 am Title: Chapter 6

Ben has more faith in JR than Michael does.  Gus and Ray along with Justin and Brian have had their fun and now need to get back to the real world.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 8:21 am Title: Chapter 5

Both JR and Gus are with significant others.  Justin will find that keeping things from his is not a good thing.

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Date: Apr 03, 2021 5:19 am Title: Chapter 4

Hormones are striking everyone.  It's a good thing I know it all works out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2021 4:59 am Title: Chapter 3

Drew needs to communicate with Emmett, since Em is thinking the worse.  Melanie is getting an office.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2021 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mel and Linds are becoming close again.  Poor Bree and her female problems.  Poor Justin needing to comfort his daughter who chose her dada instead?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2021 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Seamus' place is the best.  Poor Em, he's not got anything to worry about.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2021 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ha ha ha, Ted fearing that Brian will be in the office while Melanie is. Fireworks to forecast ?

Lindsay is finally at peace and happy in her life; that's great to read.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2021 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for these 2 new parts!

I love how Brian is jealous of Emmett/Justin's since the beginning and now, Justin seems getting "all touchy-feely" with Ted too? Excellent!

I hope Emmett has it all wrong regarding Drew; it would be really bad if Drew's adventurous mind had kicked in.

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