Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2021 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 Episode Eight (Babylon Boomerang)

The switch-up of Jennifer calling Craig and the cops showing up... I believe you are writing a WASP wife more realistically.

And, what's up Deb's ass? Is Justin planning to work the shifts and still let Deb collect the paycheck?

LOVED THIS! So, the beating at Babylon did take place, but I liked how you turned it around that Justin was the one saying... That's not love... that's hate.

I wish Brian would tell Miey to stop with the Boy Wonder name calling. That's like mails on a chalkboard to me.

HUGS,

Cathy