[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hip, hip, hooray! Mikey's a thing of the past... another faceless stranger on the street. See? The little peon just doesn't know how to keep that mouth of his shut. He should join the lifestyle so he could have a master who'd put him and his mouth to good use and shut it for him! And every time it opened, a stern look could quell the harsh words that were ready to leave his mouth. LOL... At least Debbie didn't interfere!
I was disappointed that Brian didn't seem to have anymore run-ins with Craig Taylor. I always like seeing him get his just due. But two outta three wasn't bad. But Craig deserved a return hard slap on the face. (I'll just pretend he got it.) LOL
Good story!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
You suggested the perfect world right there - Michael with his mouth shut unable to spew his nonsense on anyone else. LOL.
I think if this story had went on longer, another run-in with Craig would have been inevitable, but as it is now, the past is behind Justin, and he is all about his future with Brian. As it should be. :)
I'm glad you liked this story, Cathy. Thanks so much for commenting.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes, their relationship is moving along nicely. And *GASP* Brian is throwig the 'L' word pretty easily. And it's in Brian's nature to be loving and protective, even if he doesn't believe it.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
In this story I think it was easier for Brian to understand and accept the love he feels for Justin. As a Dom he is protective by nature, and that Justin is his now, even more loving towards him. Occasionally, he can utter the 'L' word without too much coercion. LOL.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad Justin is anxious to start his life as a sub. To me, it seems like it would be a hard life to succumb to.
This is actually only the second type of sole BDSM story I've read. And the first was way back on LJ, so you know how long it's been, and Brian was the sub then.
And this story is much milder... which is nice in my book.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes, I think it would be a very difficult life to succumb to. I can't visualize it for me, but Jusin is different in this 'verse, and certainly very OOC.
I have written a few BDSM stories for Brian and Justin. Relentless Hunger is probably the strongest, but I don't write them with the heavy graphic scenes that are probably common in that world, and that people are familiar with. I try to keep it more tame and agreeable for all readers.
Thank you as always for your support, my friend.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
Well, well... quite the first time. Poor Justin. That's awful he has to wait until he's told he can come.
But... I have to wonder how many willing souls there are out there that want to tell Brian: Then, take me, Master. I'm yours to command. LOL (See? Mikey shouldn't be a stick-in-the-mud!) Nah... he STILL wouldn't get any!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Probably not the 'first time' Justin ever expected, but his life is moving in a direction not expected as well. But, I think he's happy with that change. :)
Mikey could check all the boxes in true submission, and Brian still wouldn't touch him. Haha.
Thanks for commenting!
:)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Always nice to know the best day of your life is the day you meet that 'someone special'.
Their relationship is moving along nice and very quick.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes, once trust is established, a relationship can progress more quickly. And, this isn't a long story...so there's that too. LOL.
Thanks for commenting!
:)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ian, Ian - you lose, sucker! He put demands on Justin, and now lost him completely. And as Brian said: Justin was always out of your league; in fact, you never stood a chance with him. How true, how true!
I'm so glad Brian went with him and Justin wasn't alone with Ethan.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Ian never does compare; and in this case, it wasn't even close!
I think it was a very good thing that Brian went with Justin. Not that Justin couldn't have ultimately handled himself with the chinrat, but it probably would have been a scene.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
Okay, so Michael is a jealous, stupid ass. It's so nice when Debbie tells him exactly how it is, and doesn't just pretend he doesn't have an obsession that he should have gotten over YEARS ago. And the fact that Brian told him too, well, you'd think the guy would learn to shut his trap, but this is whiny Michael, so he probably won't.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
No matter if it hurts or not, Debbie is blunt and lays it all on the line. If she did that a bit more often, perhaps Michael would have accepted reality much sooner. Or not. He's that delusional. LOL.
Thanks for commenting, Cahty.
Hugs,
Janet
Date: May 27, 2021 8:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Well, that oughta fix ole Ethan! Justin NOT coming home tonight. He thought he was so smart... giving an ultimatum, then storming out. I'm glad Justin had more backbone and sense than giving into him.
And with Brian knowing Debbie in this story - he knows Justin is safe with her.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Brian has been the protective Dom for most of their time together so far. Justin does need his life in order, and in a comfortable and safe place before he can contemplate anything Brian might be offering. In time, they just might get there. I think Brian would be glad that Justin has Debbie too. His boy can't be too safe. :)
Thanks for the comments, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 8:04 am Title: Chapter 7
A new world for Justin to explore. And I don't believe Brian needs to worry about 'expensive' drinks. Besudes, he owns the place.
And his own personal 'get in free card'. NICE!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Justin might have been nervous about his new surroundings, but I think he was entranced as well. Something Brian will certainly know how to encourage when the time is right. :)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 8:00 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay - another evil for Brian to take care. The man is going to be busy getting rid of the scum associated with Justin's life.
And how sweet and nice of Debbie to offer a job to Justin. He surely was surprised by her kindness. Tells you how he has lived.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Justin certainly has some problems in his life, nothing that moving in some new circles won't fix. Clearly by Justin's responses, he has had a very difficult life for someone so young. Perhaps he will continue to be blessed with changes.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 7:57 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh Craig, you screwed up hitting Justin.
Do pray that my name isn't one you become familiar with...
Brian's name must be one of power in that town...
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes, Brian is extremely powerful in town. I guess it's for the reader to guess whether Craig backed down because of Brian's name, or the power in his voice when he spoke. Either way, Craig was scared. Good!
Thanks for the comments, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 7:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Daphne is a good friend. I'm always glad when he has a strong ally in her.
Craig sounds like the brute he's known to be. I'm glad Brian called in time to be aware of it.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Brian's call to Justin was certainly opportune. Justin needed Brian's intervention. It's hard to say how much further Craig would have gone. A despicable man!
Daphne is a true friend, one that is so special to have.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2021 7:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, some things came out into the open. Justin knows where Brian is really coming from.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
As much as Justin doesn't know right now, I think he does understand what Brian is all about. Now to see how that knowledge will factor into his life.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
lovely.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comments. :)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
HE'S BEEN TAKENNNNNNNNNNN
Author's Response:
Yes! Justin is certainly taken now! I'm sure Brian is thinking - it's about time!
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
I hope after time, Brian will also dote on Justin as well as possess him :)
Author's Response:
I think Brian will always consider himself Justin's Dom, but I can see where more balance will be acquired giving Justin complete comfort in their life together.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
Sweet Justin came in his pants, I don't blame him, but still ;)
Author's Response:
Justin needs a bit more experience under his belt to be until control with Brian here. Who am I kidding? That probably wouldn't make a difference.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
There is nothing sexier than a dominating Brian, holy meatballs.
Author's Response:
Yes, I think a Dom!Brian is in his element. For me, it's so easy to visualize.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 10:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Can Mikey be killed off in the next chapter?
Author's Response:
There's a thought! LOL
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:52 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm so glad he's sade and away from Ian.
Author's Response:
As always, Ian is a pain in the ass. Brian is already improving the quality of Justin's life.
Thanks for commenting! :)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:43 am Title: Chapter 7
a key card, ooooh, will he return??????
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I wonder if he will...He does seem very tempted, but who wouldn't be with Brian?
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:35 am Title: Chapter 6
This is getting juicer and huicer.
Author's Response:
Things should continue to heat up.
Thanks for the comments! :) I appreciate that!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Justin is one lucky mother fucker, that is all.
Author's Response:
If Justin doesn't realize how fortunate he is, perhaps he will soon.
:)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh shit, what does Craig want? Brian is going to have to rescue his ass before he does anything else, I can feel it.
Author's Response:
Craig certainly won't win any father of the year awards here. I don't think Craig wants to tangle with Brian in this 'verse.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2021 9:12 am Title: Chapter 3
I need to fan myself, phew
Author's Response:
Some more steamy times to come yet. :)
Thanks for commenting!