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Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2021 12:07 am Title: Chapter 26

Loved this story...thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm very glad you did. :)

Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:42 am Title: Chapter 26

This day must have been the one-year anniversary of Michael's death. That was amazing how Brian set up such a donation and grant in Michael's name. Quite an exorbitant amount, though. Brian better hope he never has a bad year.

And little Justin has learned how to handle the beast - and best him.

They had quite the ride with their relationship, but it all ended so good.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:34 am Title: Chapter 25

Poor Ted and Blake. Trying their darnedness to get Justin out of his funk, and they couldn't even do it with some weird talk.

GREAT REUNION! And I'm so happy Brian missed Justin so much and he commenced asking him to marry him.

And that's such a true saying: Two hearts forever as one. It's the way I always think of Brian and Justin.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:29 am Title: Chapter 24

This was written heartrending, and I'm sad Michael died, but ONLY because of what it's doing to the rest of the family. I really don't care that Michael died.

All the goodbyes were heartfelt. I feel more sorrow for Brian than the rest, because Brian just had very hatefilled words with Michael. I worry what that could do to Brian. When you have to live with that, it could make Brian spiral out of control.

You didn't NEED to make it so sad though! LOL  But the one good thing, as they told Emmett - if Michael dies - Ethan is screwed. (no lube available!)

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:22 am Title: Chapter 23

So glad Justin wasn't upset about Brian paying his tuition.

Now... moving onto Michael... I didn't want to feel sad emotion, but the Superman and Lois context got to me.

Hugs,

Cathy

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:18 am Title: Chapter 22

Sneaky Brian paying all Justin's tuition and then some. And shame on him using his good looks and flirting with the poor receptionist. *smirk!

And Ethan... man he's evil incarnate! He gives me the willies! I'll be totally happy when he's looked up and the key is thrown away!

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian uses all the weapons in his arsenal. Male or female. LOL. 

Ethan seems to have more than one loose screw. I don't think his straigh jacket could be tight enough! Haha.

Thanks for commenting.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:14 am Title: Chapter 21

A stalker on the loose... that's one way to get to move into Brian's loft!

They both heed bodyguards. Brian might be able to one on one protect himself against Ethan, but Ethan isn't above using something that could incapitate Brian, so he could get to justin easier.Because when you are dealing with an insane lunatic... you just never know!

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:09 am Title: Chapter 20

I'm surprised Michael came clean to Debbie, and didn't brush it off like it was Brian's fault. Yet, Debbie still kind of protected Michael, telling Brian he meant well. (Hate to break it to you, Deb. No he didn't.) But then they all got to witness Ethan's instability. Good thing Carl is around.

Then Brian issuing threats to Michael about forgetting he exists! LOL... Perfect. Maybe whimy, jealous boy will have to wake up and see the truth.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I don't think Debbie is ever as clueless about Michael as she appears. She just tries to look past it and see whatever good she can find. Look real hard, Deb. It might be there somewhere. Maybe. LOL.

Brian is doing all he can to extricate Michael from his life, and delusions...but the blind is always blind.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 2:02 am Title: Chapter 19

Thank you, Ben, for bringing Michael and forcing him to tell the truth. But with Michael, it's probably only what he had to tell them. I wish Ben would just leave Michael. If my spouse was ever that jealous and underhanded, I'd be scared to stay wih them.

But now, we have Brian in fierce protective mode... look out, Ethan!

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Without Ben's urging, Michael probably wouldn't have ever opened his mouth. If I was Ben, I couldn't stay with Michael no matter how much I loved him. It's just not a healthy relationship when there is an obsession for another man always in the middle. 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:57 am Title: Chapter 18

Frickin Michael and Ethan. Why doesn't Michael do the smart thing and admit to Brian what's going on? - WHY? - Because he's a spineless waste of space.

And Ethan is nutterier than a fruitcake.

Lord help them both with Brian there to guard Justin!

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think even Michael realizes this has gotten out of hand, but of course, he doesn't have the balls to pull back. Did anyone really think he would stand tall and do the right thing? No, probably not.

Ethan is certainly a mess, even more so than usual.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:53 am Title: Chapter 17

Michael better watch out. Coming to Brian's when he was told to stay away, and saying the same venom.

And I liked at the end how Justin asked if this is where he was kicked out, and instead, Brian covered them up and he told him to sleep... which they did in each other's arms.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael literally doesn't have a clue. He keeps trying the same old lines, thinking this time it might work. Sorry, Mikey. No dice.

I think even Justin realized that Brian usually doesn't do sleepovers, especially of the cuddling type. Justin might have his man. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:48 am Title: Chapter 16

Sweet time after the horrid date. It seems they had a fantastic time, and Brian even had to admit feelings at the end. I liked the references to canon's first time.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

When the story is right for it, I like to incorporate a bit of canon 'first time.' I don't think Brian would have allowed any of the previous irritations to ruin this special night.

Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:45 am Title: Chapter 15

Hobbs - what a way to ruin a perfect first date! Running into him at any time would be dreadful. Wouldn't it be funny if Craig just happened to mention to Hobbs SR what Justin told him? Let's hope Brian put a little fear into him.

Michael. Gosh darn, but the guys a scum in this story. He must really live off in some Lalaland if he thinks Brian will thank him.

And as if Hobbs wasn't enough, now we have greasy Ian in the picture.

I really think they need a do-over date.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, what a run of bad luck to run into Chris on this particular night. This chapter was a recipe for everything bad to put in the pot - Mikey, Chris, and the chinrat. 

Somehow I think they will get the mood back after all of the annoyances, but a do-over date probably would have been nice too. :) 

Thanks for commenting!

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2021 1:30 am Title: Chapter 14

I find it strange that Brian didn't want to be reciprocated, because I would think his desire escalated in the  bathroom.

Whiny, grumpy Michael. Always ready to spread his doom and gloom. And if he stopped to listen to himself - the kid had to be playing some game with Brian... that doesn't say much for Brian's intelligence. Then his ramblings about Brian only loving Gus and his friends... but I think he really wanted to say himself. His - not tricks - should have let him know Justin wasn't a trick.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Mikey always seems to think Justin is pulling some kind of number on Brian. As if the ingenue can manipulate the master. Oh well, typical Michael delusions. At least he's consistent!

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2021 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 26

I have always loved this story. >>Cat

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that. Thanks for the comment!

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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2021 3:24 am Title: Chapter 26

great story   Thank you



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the comments. Thank you.

:)

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2021 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 23

thank you for the great updates



Author's Response:

Your welcome. Thanks for reading and commenting! :) 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2021 6:31 am Title: Chapter 20

love it.  thanks for all the great updates.  It is strange seeing a nice Lindsey



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I don't often write Lindsay as a nice character. It was a change. Thanks for commenting. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 6:59 am Title: Chapter 13

Let's start with Michael. You ever want to just douse his face with acid to shut him up? At least he'd be screaming, and not allowing the verbal diarrhea to pour out. He was FINE with Brian going on a date until he realized who it was with. And he really pushed Brian telling him what he said to Justin, then he wasn't even sorry. Just stomped off, even after Brian warned him.

Poor Justin. Agonized over what to wear. And when he finally was all set to go - because of whiny boy - Brian was late, and Justin worried and had all these doubts.

And of course, Mother Hen Emmett had to give the beau the warnings.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think the fact that Michael only got upset about Brian having an actual date after realizing it was Justin meant something. Michael sensed from the beginning that Justin was different, even special to Brian, that's why he always wanted him gone, and belittled him at every possible occasion. Of course, that won't work with this tenacious blond. :) 

Thanks for commenting. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2021 6:51 am Title: Chapter 12

Poor Em... the world as he's always known it, (where Brian's concerned) has tilted on its axis. Poor guy. He's such a card!

Lindsay was nice. And it sounds like she's in B/J's corner.

Cynthia - I always liked her. And she knows Brian so well. Stories where her and Ted are loyal and nor REAL afraid of Brian are always nice reads.

Couldn't Brian outright hire Justin, and just say that Kinnetik has a tuition program (or something like that?) I don't know if I'm wording it correctly. (it's early - I jsut woke up.)

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Emmett just couldn't fathom the changes in Brian and that Justin has caused them. He just doesn't know what to do. I loved writing that chapter. LOL.

For once, Lindsay appears to be a good person. I know it's confusing when she's like that in my stories. I don't do that often...but this is an old one. 

Brian could probably do that, but this way, it won't interfere with school and he will get the credit at school as well. Either way, Justin seems to have a good future.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 11

love it.  Michael is such an ass like always



Author's Response:

Yes, he sure is. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 11:23 am Title: Chapter 11

Ut oh, Mikey's losing it. I hope Ben DOESN'T come home. And no matter how much Emmett, Debbie, or anyone else tries to tell Mikey different, he's NEVER going to get it. And even if he THINKS he knows Brian so well, I don't think it's only that. He has the green-eyed monster roiling through him. Making him fearful of being displaced by Justin. He's so afraid to admit the truth.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

It never seems to matter how blunt anyone is, whether it be Brian or someone else, Michael never gets it about the subject of him and Brian. Perhaps one day he will have a wake-up call. We can dream. 

Thanks for the comment, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 11:06 am Title: Chapter 10

OMG - PHONE SEX and A DATE!

Poor Brian - his rules are starting to fly, fly away into the wind...

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Rules? What rules? Haha. In regards to this particular blond, I don't think rules apply anymore. 

Thanks for commenting.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 11:04 am Title: Chapter 9

That was so sweet of Emmett trying to make the morning of Justin's birthday special.

Ah-ha - Mr. Kinney had to stay at the breeders party, instead of spending it how he envisioned. But OMG - that phone call to Justin? They have barely met, and Brian is suggesting Phone sex? Oh my! Why that seems so different from hooking up at Babylon and having sex, I'm not sure, but it does.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin deserves a special birthday, and thanks to Emmett it started in a good way. I'm sure the day isn't over yet. LOL.

Of course Brian will always find a way to have sex whether in person or not. Justin is learning so much in a short amount of time.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:59 am Title: Chapter 8

Mr. Kinney surely does push. But I'm glad he halted himself and then focused on the art work. Because I bet he just got his campaign off the ground with the board changes.

And Brian calling PIFA was great. I KNOW he THINKS it's for a different reason, but I think we know the real one.

And uh-oh. The cat's out of the bag about his birthday, and Emmett won't be around for patrol watch.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian had an agenda for Justin's visit to his office...but Justin's obvious talent derailed him - for the moment.

We know Brian would never admit it, at least at this point, but his interest in Justin far extends his lust for the young man. He is seeing much more than an attractive body, He is seeing his full potential. 

:)

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