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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:52 am Title: Chapter 7

Don't you just love employees who think they are above everything and that they are expendable? Good for old Mr. Jackson getting the boot. If he's lucky enough to find a job in advertising again, hopefully he takes it serious, so he can actually keep it.

And after the blow up with the art department - his stress reliever walks in the door. But I don;t think Mr. Kinney is going to get the kind of 'relief' he has in mind. But he does have a first-rate artist coming to see him.

I'm so happy to see Jennifer still caring for her son, and trying to help him out and make sure he has something to help him get by. Good mom in this case.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Excellent timing for Justin's arrival. Maybe his presence will be enough to soothe the savage beast within. The rest of Brian's employees may hope so if they had a clue. Haha.

Jennifer does seem to be trying to do right by Justin in this story, which isn't always the case. Justin could use one supportive parent.

Thanks for the comment.

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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:46 am Title: Chapter 6

Ah, Boys... they ramped it up at the diner with a little show. Not that Brian would ever be embarrassed, but yeah, I can see Justin getting embarrassed after standing there sucking Brian's finger. See? All the warnings are falling on death ears.

I've never understood why everyone is always so interested in who Brian did the nigh before. Never questions if Mikey and the professor did it the night before (Brain bleach! I don't want to know either!)

And good way to end the chapter - if Brian fell for someone: What exactly would that mean for all of them? Hmm, Jealous Mikey might be second or third place.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin doesn't stand a chance after displaying how much he is attracted to our determined hunter. 

Yes, that's very true. I don't know why they all care who Brian had the night before. They probably just hope to live through him by hearing any details. Lol. 

Brian potentially falling for anyone changes life as they know it. I'm sure it would be something life-altering, but for Mikey, even more so. Too bad. LOL.

Thanks for commenting.

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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:38 am Title: Chapter 5

How convenient that Brian found Justin's phone after it fell. And NOBODY happened to notice in Woody's Brian picking it up. How convenient.

I'm actually surprised Emmett went off to Babylon, leaving Justin alone. It gave Brian a little bit to try and stake that claim.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Emmett had a duh moment thinking his little lamb was safe at home for the night. Obviously, he thought the hunter had given up for the night. Definitely a moment of underestimating Brian. Haha.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:36 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Debbie helped Emmett see - a little - that you can't stop the inevitable, but Em is Em, and you can be sure he'll keep trying to stop the train wreck.

But if Debbie thinks Michael will come around after meeting Justin, she better hop a ride on that delusional train, herself.

And what a show at Woody's! I'm impressed with Justin for TRYING to stay firm and in control.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

What a shocker that Brian would use a game of pool to make his moves on Justin. Nah. Never happen. LOL. 

Debbie can be so wise, but sometimes the blinders are so thick when it comes to her knot-headed offspring. Oh well. Live and learn.

Thanks for the comment.

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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:30 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh, Emmett. He's going to keep trying, isn't he? I hope he realizes it will just up his nerves and all will be in vain. Who can resist Brian if he is on the prowl?

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm not sure anyone can truly resist Brian when he is that in your face smoldering heat. LOL. Emmett is trying to take care of his young friend, but I think he knows it is probably hopeless.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2

Emmett can certainly understand how bad parents can be. I'm glad he's taking Justin under his wing, and had the extra room for him.

Predator Brian already in the prowl. I hope Emmett knows his warnings will always fall on death ears where Brian is concerned. Too yummy a specimen to resist for long.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian will certainly be in prowl mode in this story and excessively focused on Justin. I think it will turn into more than his standard lust quickly though. :) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2021 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn Craig. I'm so happy Justin told Craig about the hand-job. Just maybe he'd mention it to old man Hobbs (Joking like) and Hobbs SR. might slap the son up a little.

And Emmett is a darn good friend. I'm glad he found him.

 HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Craig is an ass. That's all there is. LOL. I always admired Justin's backbone with Craig no matter how much his father tried to intimidate him. Justin has a strong spirit and strength of character that his father will never have. 

Emmett is a great friend. Justin is so lucky to have him.

Thanks for your support, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2021 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love it when Emmett gets all possessive over his friends. He has a good heart and is a good friend to have. Poor Justin though, Brian wants him sooooo bad.

Author's Response:

Emmett is trying his best to protect his young friend. He means so well...but this might be a difficult task, especially since Justin isn't exactly running in the other direction. LOL.

Thanks for commenting. :) 

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2021 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh dear, poor sweet Justin haha

Author's Response:

Justin's life is about to be overtaken by a whirlwind - LOL.

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2021 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Craig is a jerk, but I know Emmett will keep him safe.

Author's Response:

Justin has clearly suffered much from Craig, but yes, he has such a good friend in Emmett. He needs that.

Thanks for the comment. :) 

Reviewer: Lorma Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2021 4:11 am Title: Chapter 3

Brian the predator!  I think he is about to pounce.  He will lose his heart to Justin I wager.



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is certainly predatory here. This was my first multi-chaptered QAF story, so I really tested my own boundaries. LOL.

Well, when the big ones fall, they tend to fall hard. Haha. Hopefully, it will be fun to watch. :)

Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2021 2:38 am Title: Chapter 3

love it.  thanks for another story



Author's Response:

Thank you! You are very welcome. Much more to come. Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: Lorma Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2021 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy you are posting here.  I read all of your stories in livejournal but when I try to leave a comment I an unable to because it doesn't recognize my username.  I love your stories and can't wait to read more of this.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad to be back here. :) 

Going forward, my stories will only be here and at A03. There is much more to come. I hope you enjoy this story.

Thanks so much for commenting! 

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