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Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Love love love it .... I'm off to read the sequel probably for the 10th time 



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you, Sharon. That means a lot to me. I did enjoy my time in this 'verse more than I can explain. :) 

Thanks so much for reading again, and again. LOL. And, for leaving a comment. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2021 6:29 am Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

I’m glad Brandon stayed on. He was a good guy this time around, and someone that Ben most needed in his life.

All’s well, and the ending was good. Justin turning into the playful harem boy, just showed their days to come will be filled with interesting endeavors.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

All's well that ends well; at least, for now. LOL 

I'm sure many of my readers didn't believe until the very end that Brandon was a true good guy. I can't imagine why! Haha.

I can see them returning to the harem setting to play from time to time, but Justin's life truly is right by his sultan's side. :)

Thank you for reading and all of your comments, Cathy. That is always deeply appreciated.

:)

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2021 6:26 am Title: Chapter 29

Well, it would seem like everything is going good. I wonder with Justin being an orphan, and never having something to call his own, if that has made him a little more stubborn here. But he won this fight.

The savage Brian Kinney actually had a heart.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2021 6:24 am Title: Chapter 28

Ooh, I hope the remaining members of the harem take the news very well, and don’t set out to harm Justin!

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 27

aI am reading it again

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 27

Those two men are the most stubbornist things I've ever seen! Neither will relent. Nor will they talk things through!

Well, maybe Brian will gallop after the runway airplane when Justin's taking off! (LOL)!

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 26

I’m not so sure that Brian doesn’t love only him… it’s just a life of conditioned circumstances and cultures that he’s also dealing with.

Maybe time is all he needs...

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 25

If Justin is going back to America, the ONLY way Sultan Amir Ali Nazari will win, is if he concedes to Justin’s demands by morning.

I think they both have similar goals though tonight. Brian’s hoping that after tonight, Justin won’t be able to leave, and Justin’s hoping after tonight, that Brian will see the prospects of only having him in his bed.

Silly Men!

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 24

So Justin issued his ultimatum, and Brian refuses to change. He had his chance.

And if Justin is going to freely move about the grounds, I really hope Michael is DEAD!

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 23

So, Brian actually saw the dead body of Michael. I can’t believe it was that easy. Unless he has an ace-in-the-hole that will take over and continue the disruption.

It’s definitely decision time, Justin. I’m curious if he’ll demand the other slaves be let loose, and just him stay.

And what will Brian's answer be to that demand?

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 22

I’m curious if between the visit with Gus, and his next 24 hours with Brian, if Justin will end up changing his mind. I understand not wanting to just be the flavor of the day, but if his feelings are running so deep that it would bother him for Brian to pick someone else one night, then he made the wrong bargain.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 21

It’s like making a deal with the devil himself. I grant your wish, but here are the conditions… So after 24 hours of eroticism, just what will Justin decide?

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

Ah… can I doubt the crazy man took the easy way out? All I can think is he was able to control someone, and someone is doing his bidding Because the first report concerning Ben was false, so Michael has someone under his control.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2021 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

I can hardly wait to find out the whole of Michael’s plan. And if Ben is guilty of something, I don’t think Brian will give him a second chance.

And Justin is hooked. But still insists on trying to act indifferent.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 18

God dang that Michael. He shouldn’t have been able to get close enough to the cell bars. And maybe if Brian would be completely honest with Ben, and then doubled with the rape, maybe Ben would see death as the best option!

Actually, that 'Mine alone' at the end of the chapter, almost sent shivers. It’s too ominous sounding. As long as Michael is around, that can't be promised.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 16

Boy, my wish of Michael to be beheaded, isn’t going to come true, since he made that stupid promise to Ben not to kill him.

And I noticed Michael’s thoughts that once the slaves were gone, he could replace them. Too bad, so sad. Lots of other men in the world. You lose, Michael!

And since he is to be jailed, I hope they put him in the far corner in chains and shackles.

But since Michael defiled one of his harem slaves, with no lube or condom apparently, (and is Brian aware of that? He better have Joshua seen by the doctor.)

Anyway, I think I have the perfect punishment.

MAKE HIM A EUNUCH. And cut out his tongue. (Speak No Evil.)

Because he actually committed rape.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

So Ben really wasn't hypnotized and thought to play along.

And Brian got interrupted after starting to make inroads with Justin... maybe Michael really CAN be beheaded!

I honestly hope Ben was smart enough to secure Michael so he can't leave their home. If he's bound and gagged, he can't wreck any more havoc.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh dear. Michael really did get Brandon hypotized... if anything happens, Brian will be outrageous.

Thank god Ben realized Michael is up to no good.

When everything comes out, I hope it's a primitive enough island, so Michael can be beheaded!

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2021 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

I have to wonder how Michael can roam about so undetected. He hides around corners inside. He hides behind a shrub. Someone must have seen him walking out there, then just disappearing. I just find it strange. And I don't have a good feeling about the conversation he overheard. And let's say he brings discord to the Sultan's harem... I hope he realizes that the Sultan would STILL turn him away.

Justin is so funny - Surrender and pleasure for a season. He had been given his first ray of hope, so why did he feel so disturbed about becoming the man the Sultan no longer desired? LOL...

It's like - do you, or don't you??? And as adamant as he don't - yet it bothers him to not be desired! Make up your mind! LOL

I'm interested in finding if he WILL surrender tonight.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2021 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 12

So the evil one is studying hypnosis. If he masters that, he will certainly create havoc on that island! I'm not sure how Ben puts up with him.

I'm really surprised Brian didn't make Justin put the condom on him. I was so ready for that maneuver!

Then Brian's warning to Brandon that nobody could touch Justin this night - I again was surprised that Brian didn't tell Brandon to watch Justin closely and make sure HE didn't touch himself! (You know, all the more cruel!) You can't cum! LOL

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael being skilled at hypnosis!? Can things get any scarier than that?? LOL.

I think Brian would have been a savage if he'd had Justin put the condom on him. In Justin's current mindset, that would have been torture!

Brian probably didn't think of all the options when he was warning Brandon about Justin staying untouched. He's so off balance by our feisty little blond he isn't thinking of all the angles. LOL.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2021 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

Well, Brian so far appears more savage/ more barbaric in this story than others of yours.

And Justin is a full-fledged brat so far. (I say that with a chuckle.)

I can hardly wait to see how things change and evolve for them.

And I already detest Michael. He's sneaky. Not a good sign.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian is quite barbaric at times in this story...but there could be other stories coming that he's even more so. Just saying. LOL.

Justin always seems to know how far he can push Brian, no matter what the premise. 

Yeah, it's probably wise to be wary of Michael...particularly in this story.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2021 7:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Hiya Janet,

So, so glad to see your stories back here on KD.

And especially this one. It's my absolute favorite

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Hi Meriam!

I can't tell you how glad I am to be back, and sorry to have left in the first place. We learn a lot from our mistakes. 

I'm so glad you liked this particular story. I have to admit this type of premise has been my favorite to write. 

Hugs,

Janet

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