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Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2021 5:04 am Title: Chapter 27

I am stressed out LOL

Author's Response:

Haha yes, stressful times, but it will all work out. Just hang in there. :) 

Thank you for your comments!

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2021 5:01 am Title: Chapter 26

WHY the hell did Justin call him ffs,

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That phone call wasn't Justin's smartest moment - LOL

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Date: Jul 02, 2021 11:53 am Title: Chapter 21

HOTCAKES

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Date: Jul 02, 2021 11:32 am Title: Chapter 20

Now Justin doesn't need the money anymore though, oh noooo

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Date: Jul 02, 2021 11:17 am Title: Chapter 19

Linds needs to see that Mel is bad news here and that although Brian is intense, he means well.

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Date: Jul 01, 2021 7:09 am Title: Chapter 18

My heart can't take much more :)

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Date: Jul 01, 2021 7:00 am Title: Chapter 17

NOT EXPECTING THAT

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Date: Jul 01, 2021 6:49 am Title: Chapter 16

I love it when Brian gets mad, it's so hot.

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Date: Jul 01, 2021 6:22 am Title: Chapter 15

If I saw Craig overlooking some water, I would run and push him in LOL. Seriously though, I cannot believe Mel is involved!!! I am LIVID.

Author's Response:

Craig couldn't be any version of a worse father than he is in this story. I would push him too!

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2021 2:17 pm Title: Chapter 14

I am so happy Brian didn't let him out of their agreement :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2021 6:57 am Title: Chapter 30

Fantastic story I have just read all the chapters in one go. I feels familiar I think I have read it before. Did you write it years ago or one similar. Anyway awesome story thank you 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Yes, this was written a long time ago. I am currently getting all of my other stories posted here to KD, but you could have read it at another website. 

Thanks for the comment. :) 

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 9

Noooooooooooooooo, Sap needs to let it go :(

Author's Response:

Gary is out of control, but his time is coming, along with the reasons why he does what he does. So much more to happen, if you haven't read that far yet.

Thank you for reading and your comments. 

:)

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

I am worried Ben is going away, what if Sap comes after them?

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Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh god, why can't they have someone go collect his stuff?

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Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love sassy Justin so much, it sends Brian crazy.

Author's Response:

Yes, sassy Justin does make Brian crazy. He wants to control him so bad! Haha.

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Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

Jesus, take the 5k and have the best sexy times f your life, Justin.

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Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

Brian to the rescue.

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Brian is staying busy with his rescue missions, but I'm sure he will get it done!

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2021 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

Go Brin, how dare Melanie bad mouth him in front of his son. She;'s a bitch. Take her down!

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2021 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Confident Brian is so very sexy, right?

Author's Response:

He really is! LOL

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2021 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sap is a major asshole. I love seeing Brian with Gus though.

Author's Response:

Yes, Sap is a total creep in this story. Brian and Gus moments are fun.

:) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 30

I loved your exploration of their mutual obsession, need,and posessivenes. The ending was touching and fulfilling.

Hugs,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this story, Cathy. At the beginning, it probably looked like another predator Brian chasing after his temping blond, with a bit of plot thrown in for good measure. This turned out to be a lot of drama with so much going on, and I think a couple of surprises along the way. I did enjoy writing this story.

Thank you for reading, commenting, and all of your support. I truly appreciate that.

:)

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 29

All’s well. At least Brian talked reasonably, and didn’t go off the deep end with getting furious at Justin. They each needed something in their lives. It must have been fate how they met. Thank goodness Gus wanted to ride through Central Park.

I’m so happy for Jennifer. Craig needed to die. He had hurt too many lives. Although death is the easy way out. I would have loved to see him in prison and become someone's plaything.

But this way, it saved Justin the heartache and humiliation of having to get up on the stand and say everything Craig had done to him.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 28

Hahaha… Poor little Sap. Even without the drugs and cash from his business, if his home still had men (probably mere boys) still tied up and men passed out, he would go down for a long time. And I bet his home has a safe full of drugs and cash too. But it’s almost laughable for him to think he won’t be gone that long, that he can still get revenge on Brian and Justin. He’ll be an old man by the time he’s released, if ever. See? I bet when his case is finished in court, and what he will have to endure in prison, he’ll wish he were dead.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 27

Brian must have a past with Sap that we’re not totally aware of.

It was one thing Sap was going for Justin, but putting Gus’ name out there - well, Gary is probably going to wish he had walked the straight and narrow - or else if death could have taken him.

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2021 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 26

That evil, evil slimeball. I have to believe Sap is using more scare tactics and threats, instead of actually having strong connections. Because I think if he did, he would have used one of them instead of an insignificant as Kip.

But WTH, Justin? He had to have a moment of pure insanity to take that step in calling Sap, and thinking he could handle him. Because Sap won't play fair - as in one-on-one.

Hugs,

Cathy

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