Date: Jul 13, 2022 9:40 am Title: Chapter 15
No sympathy for Chris Hobbs he got what h deserved and Justin got justice for the crime Chris committed against Justin and so many others before or in the future.
Brian and Justin together for all of eternity will be very interesting for both of them because it will never be boring nor easy but it will be quite fulfilling cor both of them.
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[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 14
Tonight Brian's life truly begins as well nothing and no one will keep them apart from now on, though Brian didn't want to turn Justin but it seems Fate had other plans for these two.
Brian is going to enjoy being Justin's maker as much as he enjoys being his lover because Justin will always keep him on his toes.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wouldn't want to be Chris Hobbs right now, he is getting just the start of what he really deserves though he won't be enjoying the time he had left for much longer.
Brian needs to get Justin out of the hospital and away for everyone else so he can help him as he begins this next journey.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 12
One chapter of Justin's life ends a new one begins for Brian as well sometimes to people just have a connection that eclipses everything else, including another person hatred for what they refuse to understand or keep denying.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
Feelings aren't always such a bad thing when those feelings lead to an engaging blue eyed blonde who accepts you for the predator you are and loves you despite alk your many flaws.
Now the prom is near getting a bit nervous.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Craig is about to learn that No One touches what he considers his and Justin is truly his and he will be protected for as long as Brian wants to keep him around which it seems will be Forever!!
Glad I am not Craig Taylor right now.
Date: Jul 12, 2022 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Brian he has been ensnared in love's Trap and there is no way he is getting out now Justin is his and Brian is Justin's.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Glad Michael was out of the way before Brian and Justin talked and took their connection to a whole new level.
Justin wasn't afraid of Brian or the revelation that he had been sleeping with a vampire he just wants to be with Brian and now that the have shared blood their bond will be stronger.
Justin going home in the morning will be interesting now b that they are bond together.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Foolish move to anger Brian Luke that Michael he got of way lucky because Brian could just kill him and easily dispose of his body no besides Deb, David, Emmett and Ted will miss him and that can easily be remedy by implanting new thoughts.
Justin came a bit too early but I guess Brian can wipe his memory or tell him the truth?
Michael and David will be quite happy together.
Craig hitting Justin was a Huge Mistake not surprised Jennifer can't see the danger she is quite dense when it comes to her husband.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Brian is falling deeper under Justin's spell and he hasn't even realized it yet this may be just a one time repeat for Brian but Justin won't allow him to keep living in that illusion.
Michael is going to be trouble because he sees Brian as his possession kinda like David views Michael what a strange twist right there lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 9:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Justin stealing Brian's tricks was always my Favorite scene on the show it was so Hot!!
Still hot reading about it because no one could really capture Brian's attention the way Justin could it wad beautiful to watch over and over again.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 9:34 am Title: Chapter 4
The fact that Brian didn't want to turn Justin away says how quickly that sweet blond got under his skin and started burrowing into his cold heart, Justin really was the only one Brian actually wanted to stay but he has to maintain his image so that meant hurting the one who would come to mean the most to him.
What Brian also didn't realize was that HR issued a challenge to Justin that he just couldn't refuse despite b what Brian and Michael said.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2022 9:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Love having the first time favorite for Brian and Justin played here in the story makes it even more intimate for both of them and like they really are meant to be together.
Like on the show this night was the start of both of their lives changing Forever!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2022 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is foolish if David to threaten Brian even if he wasn't a vampire he would still destroy him and he would smile awhile doing it.
Michael is just chasing a fantasy with Brian he can stay with David despite Brian not liking him they are well suited for one another.
Brian has Justin in his jeep pretty soon he will be in his bed and nothing will stop them now.
Date: Jun 27, 2021 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
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[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ah… they should have toyed with their food a little longer. Allow Chris to walk away, only in the blink of an eye be next to him again. They probably should have let Hobbs, Sr. spend thousands of dollars on lawyers, only to kill Chris afterward.
Anyway, Justin called himself a 'monster'. They COULD become ‘vegetarians'. Although it would not be as fulfilling.
OR - they could start taking care of the vilest criminals, saving the county lots of money. Just think of all the good they could do.
Unless there were pests like Michael and Craig that needed to be under their control.
And lastly, this was a very nice alternative to season 1.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I think having Chris Hobbs fate in his hands was probably too much for a baby vampire. Of course he would be savage, but he's not a monster. I don't think Brian will ever allow that to happen. Justin has so much to learn about life as a vampire, and I doubt he could have a better guide. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this alternative season 1. It was certainly that, and nice to see them in a happy and loving place at this stage.
Thanks for reading and commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, Jennifer and the doc didn’t get their way, and even Jennifer’s appalled reaction got her nothing. Too bad, Mama.
Justin can now go finish his transference without eyes watching his every move.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
And Justin is going to be a vampire! Way to go! Now who will exact revenge on Hobbs? Will it be a solo act, or both?
I can just imagine the images Brian has been sending to Hobbs’ mind. Just think of all the evil he could conjure up. No wonder Hobbs has been running scared.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Chris could go crazy just from Brian's mind manipulations. Of course, I can't feel sorry for him, but that would be rough!
It's too bad Justin had to be turned so young, but thankfully, he had this option instead of losing his life entirely. That would have been a tragic end to this love story.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear… the prom. And a little worse outcome. When Hobbs’ fate finally comes, I have a feeling he’d have preferred a busted knee.
I have to wonder if it will go to court before Brian doles out his own brand of punishment, because Daphne was hurt too. So, what will the court system say?
I think it would be funny for Chris to get community service in court and come out all cocky, only to come face to face with two vampires. LOL...
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
This was certainly a case of how the prom could go even worse. Hopefully, everything works out in the end.
I would run far and fast if I were Chris. but, I don't think he's smart enough to do that.
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
I found myself chuckling during Brian and Craigs exchange. Brian wanted to play with him some more. He could have had him do all sorts of embarrassing things… laugh like a hyena, etc…. And at some later point, sent it to the country club…
But now that Craig is controlled and allowing Justin to see Brian, I guess that’s the best accomplishment.
And unfortunately, I see the prom is coming up. I just hope Brian’s there and can stop it.
I was certainlu surpised to see the 'Brian and Mikey' friendship back on. Didn't Brian realize a good thing he had with Michael not wantting to be around him?
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: Jun 27, 2021 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
another great story. Thank you
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[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Ooh… Brian has Craig… Unfortunately, I’m sure Brian will only use Mind Compulsion on him. He really should knock him on his head a little, as Craig would never know how he got it.
Jennifer must have gotten treated to the ‘dick’ speech, that the therapist and she were swayed to believing Justin.
And Chris Hobbs? Don’t tell me this will be a remake of the prom? I suppose it's possible as this is set in season one.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes, under mind compulsion would be the perfect time to rough Craig up a bit. Sounds like fun to me. But, will he or won't he?
The prom could definitely have some painful canon moments, all part of the plot that advances this story to the conclusion. Of course, it goes without saying, still a happy ending. :)
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
Hugs,
Janet
Date: Jun 27, 2021 5:53 am Title: Chapter 9
If Brian has been a vampire for a hundred years, pray tell, how can he NOT do repeats?
I also hope his healing saliva can soothe Justin’s bottom. LOL...
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I guess in 100 years, Brian has moved around a lot. It's difficult to imagine him never doing any repeats, but when you have the skills and charm that Brian does, I suppose you can get anyone you want.
I'm not sure vampire healing saliva would work on that...but that's quite a thought! LOL.
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 4:23 am Title: Chapter 8
Ah, lover’s sweet refrain. If Brian keeps feeding Justin, maybe he won’t need iron pills. He’ll just replenish himself with Brian’s blood.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2021 4:22 am Title: Chapter 7
Ut-oh… Michael outstayed his welcome, or did Justin actually arrive early? I can’t believe Brian would have put himself in that position.
But now we shouldn’t have to worry about pesky Michael. I can’t believe he tried to lie to Brian about the safety deposit box and stuff. If anyone should know a vampire can read your thoughts, it should have been Michael. And how foolish to threaten a vampire.
Should I fear for Craig’s safety?? Nah… Not feeling that generous.
Anxiously awaiting to see Justin’s reaction.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
It was inevitable that Michael would push too hard. In the case of a vampire, not a smart thing to do, and always consequences involved. Certainly a risk attached, but Brian could probably use mind control to handle any problem this revelation could cause, but I don't think he wants to do that with Justin. Hopefully it all works out for the best. :)
Thanks for commenting!