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Reviewer: 1Word Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2021 5:39 am Title: Chapter 30: Following His Heart

Fantastic read! I would love a second story please!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I suppose there is much that could be added to this story. I never rule it out. Perhaps in time when the other ideas get written - LOL.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 30: Following His Heart

So their mutual love for each other opened other aspects to their relationship. And Brian broke down and wanted to share his bed nightly with his new love.

Yet, they have their wonderful playroom when they feel like exploring that side of themselves. And Brian can have unlimited pole dances, and possibly lap dances.

And the sicko Michael stands wrong again… as this one’s here to stay.

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

I don't think Brian ever expected his feelings to evolve to such a degree. He certainly wanted that special sub in his life, but he got so much more. I definitely see the playroom being used on a regular basis, but I think they will have a good balance overall. 

It's always nice when Michael is thrown to the curb and put in his place. I do enjoy watching that all play out. Haha.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 29: Amending An Agreement

They fell in love. So they are more equal than Dom/sub… but Playroom rules will apply so Brian can keep that part of himself. Yay for Brian!

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 28: The Heart of A Dominant

The hard Mr. Kinney has fallen for his sub. I think their contract will definitely be rewritten. And poor widdle Mikey’s plans all fell to the wayside. At least Mikey can’t even go to Babylon, and not have a husband anymore… my, my, where will he pick up a trick? How will he afford one with just his meager comic sales?

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 27: Just Another Night at Babylon... Or More?

Okay… how did Justin disobey him? He went to work, which Brian knew he had to do. Justin rebuffed Brandon’s advances, so he didn’t betray Brian. I guess it just confuses me.

And I think Brian should buy the comic shop too, and one missed payment, or a day late - take control of it.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I think Brian's jealousy triggered his initial response; however, he did believe Justin was disobeying by going to Babylon without his personal protection. Justin's constant safety was a large part of their arrangement; at least it was to Brian. 

In the end, though, it will all balance out. :)

Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Up is Hard to Do

WHY???? The slime should have been left in the gutter! If he had absolutely NOTHING, he might have to resort to street corners just to find a meal. I would have ruined him. Put aside what he did to Brian, but for the simple fact of how he betrayed Ben, he deserves nothing!

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 25: Friends and Enemies

Oooh, so Mikey isn’t through creating havoc. I look very forward to the infliction of his punishment. And Brandon is a fool for going along with it.

HUGS

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:19 am Title: Chapter 24: Revelations and Realizations

I think the stern dominant is slowly losing that need to dominate, and instead, FEEL the love and tenderness between them.

I found myself wondering about Justin’s punishment and made to watch the videos all day, while Brian watched him. I was curious if Brian would have been able to actually see the videos, or just Justin’s response to them?

HUGS

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian's cameras would have been focused on Justin and the bed, and how Justin responded. I don't think he would be watching the videos as well, but he has probably committed those particular scenes to memory - LOL.

Feelings are beginning to take over, of course, Brian will always be controlling and a Dom to Justin's submissive, but I can see where he won't be so severe in time. 

Thanks for commenting!

:) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:17 am Title: Chapter 23: Morning Temptation

Justin, Justin… Do not tease the lion, because he becomes more forceful… even though I find it fun when you do.

This should prove to be an interesting day. I do hope Brian gives food and bathroom breaks.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:16 am Title: Chapter 22: Starting Over

Ut-oh, Justin is in for a fully miserable day. I hope it’s not too much for Brian to allow him to take a nap at some point… Yeah, I didn’t think so.

And I feel gypped with the little that Michael was disciplined. I really hope that part isn’t done yet.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

It does appear that Justin is in for a very long day. I suppose he could fall asleep, but I have a feeling his watchful dom would awaken him if he did. Haha.

Thanks for commenting! 

:) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:15 am Title: Chapter 21: Limits of Patience

A little hot-headed Justin is always fun with a domineering Brian.

I can't wait until Ben speaks with Michael. I really hope he kicks him out. His loose tongue is always getting him into trouble. And this in't like Michael said something in private, he let his disgust known in the diner where anyone can overhear.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:12 am Title: Chapter 20: The Playroom

I caught that - in Brian’s bed - and was glad Justin actually questioned it. I have a feeling just because BEFORE Justin no man did - but AFTER Justin - a much different want will exist.

This was HOT! Sizzling good.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I did try to pull out some extra special steam for certain chapters in this story. The premise called for that, and it's not easy after writing so many sex scenes for them - LOL.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:11 am Title: Chapter 19: Training A Submissive

Crap! Mikey seems to have gotten off easy. Or maybe I just have to wait until Michael is called into Brian’s office. And Ethan’s infatuation wasn’t mentioned either.

Well, we’re onto the Toy Room. I wonder what that will entail.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2021 6:10 am Title: Chapter 18: Awkward Encounters

First, if Ethan wants to remain hired, he’d get those feelings and looks UNDER control.

Second, I REALLY hope Justin tells Brian everything Michael said and his actions. I guess I wonder if Michael is so hateful because he was rebuffed by Brian at some point, or if he really just detests that lifestyle.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Ethan should know his boss well enough to realize severe consequences could follow if he went after Justin. But, once a fool, always a fool...

I guess we'll see if Michael is really filled with contempt for the lifestyle, or if it's something more. In any event, Michael is truly annoying, but that's nothing new!

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:) 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 17: Negotiations

Very possessive, Mr. Kinney. I’m glad they got the contract out of the way, so they can get onto the more pleasurable stuff?

Couldn’t you just see Gale as Christian Grey? Good looks, smoldering eyes… but alas, he would have been pursuing a woman…

HUGS,

Cathy

 



Author's Response:

I have never read the books, but as soon as I watched the first movie, I just couldn't get the idea out of my head of creating a Christian Grey character in Brian. I think he fits so well, at least, the way I tend to write him. I couldn't resist making it happen. It was really fun making it all play out. :) 

Thanks for commenting!

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 16: Research and Decisions

When Brian came in, loosening his tie, unbuttoning his shirt, removing cufflinks - I’m surprised Justin didn’t run for the door. LOL… He should have known that was a mere tactic in reminding him why he shouldn’t say no.

But boy - possessive Brian, how could you WANT to say no? I’m also surprised the little imp didn’t tell Ben - NO - just to see what might happen. He probably thought Ben would play caveman - throw him over his shoulder and tossed into the car! LOL

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

This was actually one of my favorite chapters to write in this story. I could see in my mind Brian's reaction during and after when Justin sent the 'thank you, but no thank you' style text message. In this 'verse, Brian would be striking fast. LOL. 

I think Justin is a bit taken off guard by all of the players in his new world. Ben would probably be intimidating to him as well.

Possessive Brian is a delight for me. And if he's jealous, that's even better. I guess that's why I write him like this so often. :) 

Thanks for commenting, Cathy. 

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 15: The Contract

It’s a HUGE decision to make. And something if you plan on doing, you MUST be sure and okay with EVERYTHING! I guess I wonder if this is an exclusive thing too. Or if Brian can’t go out wandering. Or can he make Justin sleep with someone else? Lots to be certain about.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm not sure in a RL situation if exclusivity would be part of the arrangement. I believe when an actual contract is involved, and not just a dom and sub doing a scene, it probably would be. I suppose a third party could always be brought in to spice things up even more, or even for training purposes, but whether spoken or not, I think Brian is searching for a sub of his own, emphasis on ONLY for him. LOL.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 6:31 am Title: Chapter 14: A Taste of His World

That was HOT! I am hoping we find a little more info on Brian’s youth, solely because of the separate bedroom thing. It just seems strange that once they are completely involved, that Brian still wants to sleep separately. And he never even opened his bedroom door for Justin to get a glimpse.

I find that so odd.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Yes, we'll see if Brian sticks to the separate bedroom arrangement. That was something incorporated from the film for the most part, although, despite what he does with his submissive partners, he is a very private man. Of course, we know that Justin isn't the ordinary submissive.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

Hugs,

Janet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 3:43 am Title: Chapter 13: Breaking Point

A submissive virgin. I don’t think Brian realized there were any of those out there. And a Brian Kinney blow-job, should make Justin say - yes, yes, yes - where do I sign?

I guess I’m curious about Justin’s back story. No family is mentioned, other than him and Daphne being friends, and her in journalism vs medicine.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 3:42 am Title: Chapter 12: Trust Must Be Given

Justin played a mighty dangerous game tonight. But I think Brandon played a worse one. And if Brandon loses his club because of this - it’s his own fault.

I do hope Ethan’s snooping was altruistic, because if not - he’s destroyed.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

You would think Brandon would recognize the mark of a true predator and not play this kind of game, and one he definitely can't win. I almost feel sorry for him. Almost. 

Is Ethan ever altruistic? I suppose there's a chance. I guess we'll find out. 

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 3:40 am Title: Chapter 11: Questionable Choices

I’m almost scared of what the lesson Brian has in mind for Justin tonight at Babylon.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 2:05 am Title: Chapter 10: Patience Tested

Shame, shame Mr. Dom… you are supposed to be a man of control. LOL… I see that it didn't go over so well in the enclosed quarters.

BUT… maybe that exquisite taste of Brian’s lips will help make up Justin’s mind.

Although, reading those detailed comments in the contract, I think it takes a certain type of person to say yes.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian had to have his first taste, and that will probably make him even more memorable to Justin. How would it not? LOL.

A contracted sub certainly takes the right person. We should find out soon if that person is Justin.

Thanks for commenting!

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 2:03 am Title: Chapter 9: Wake Up Call

A lot of dang teasing in this chapter, and trying to move forward. Justin shows qualities of a sub, but not totally. He still seems to have some reservations.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

Justin does have reservations, but maybe if Brian wasn't such a bulldozer he would have an easier time. But, Brian isn't about to slow down. LOL.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 2:02 am Title: Chapter 8: Intentions Revealed

This could definitely get interesting. I can see these two going head to head, and Justin kind of holding his own. Not a total pushover. Let the games begin.

HUGS,

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2021 2:02 am Title: Chapter 7: Not So Easily Deceived

I wish for Justin’s sake, he would have thought that whole ‘asking Brandon to be his boyfriend’ because Brian is so intuitive and knows it was a plot, and I don’t think Brian likes mind games.

Besides - come on - Brian vs Brandon - NO CONTEST!

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

This subterfuge probably isn't in Justin's best interest no matter how you look at it. Brian definitely won't appreciate this type of game, and encouraging Brandon isn't wise either. I guess we'll see how THAT plays out.

Thanks for commenting. :) 

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