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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2021 12:23 am Title: Chapter 3: A Defiant Spirit

Well, you had me laughing again! When Brian was considering his three options, as soon as I started reading the third one, I thought, Yep… this is it, then that was what Brian decided. LOL... And Emmett’s sixth sense had to tell Brian he couldn’t do that!

"This is much like an inspection of a horse. Should I take you on, I would be riding you in a different manner."  What if: What if Justin wasn’t gay??? LOL

Super strong-headed Justin, meet super, super strong-headed King Brian.

As far as Craig - I was so excited that the king witnessed the striking of Justin’s face. He shouldn’t only have had him removed, but Brian should have struck him just as hard if not harder, Let him be dragged out with his face burning in humiliation.

And Emmett is so funny. Besides, I highly doubt Justin could escape the palace walls.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

I did want a special line for Brian to use at his initial 'inspection' of Justin. I'm glad it was funny. It was meant to be amusing, but to also display Brian's extreme arrogance as well. LOL. 

It is surprising that Brian didn't retaliate against Craig, but his day is coming for sure. 

I enjoyed writing Emmett here as well. He is certainly entertaining. Haha.

Thanks for commenting, Cathy.

:) 

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