[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2021 9:42 am Title: Chapter 17: A Kiss Taken... or Freely Given?
Would it have been safer for Jennifer and Justin to be put in the tower? Nothing could have gotten to them then. I can’t see Sapperstein getting inside the palace. On the grounds, he could move about undetected. So something doesn’t feel right to me.
Out of the three, Sapperstein SHOULD have been the first to die… he was the evilest of the bunch!
But a small progress… Justin willingly gave him a kiss.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Brian thought that since Justin was going to Jennifer to tell her about Craig, he wouldn't uproot them after that. I suppose they have a wider perimeter they can see far into the distance. Since the Sap just escaped, I don't think he will strike immediately...but who's to say with that cretin. And yes, Sapperstein did deserve his death sentence. I couldn't eliminate such a major villain this early in the story. A story that is my longest story...so we have a bit of adventure to go yet. LOL.
A kiss freely given is BIG progress.
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