Reviews For Primitive
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 7:37 am Title: Chapter 34: Surprising Visitors

I’m glad Brian and Justin seem to be getting along a little more civilly. I think Justin is starting to see things a little differently. He has his brattiness tendencies - just like canon Justin - but he does learn from his mistakes.

It’s unfortunate Brian walked into the room and heard Jennifer’s statement. Just hearing that part, seems worse than what they were talking about previously. I’m pleased that her father and family are accepting her back home. But I think at some point when things were so bad for her and Justin when Craig was around, I wish at that time she might have contacted them.

And then Brian revealed so very much with his - Neither one of them is you. My heart went *flutter, flutter* And when Brian sees the painting of Gus, I’m sure all will be forgotten.

HUGS,

Cathy



Author's Response:

They do seem to be moving in the right direction. I'm sure Justin's outspokeness will rear up from time to time. And, Brian's hot-headedness will counteract with that. LOL. Brian said more than probably either of them realizes with that little revelation. Justin has gotten past the king's walls. He has fallen for his sort-of captive. 

I wouldn't be surprised if in the past Jennifer had feared Craig's reaction if she contacted her family, whether toward her or Justin, and she seems very old-fashioned here. After going against her father's wishes she probably feels she has to accept the consequences for her mistake. That certainly wasn't fair to Justin. 

Thanks for commenting.

:)

You must login (register) to review.