[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2021 4:33 am Title: Chapter 26
Well it sounds like Justin will have to give up his career as a painter and doing shows. Poor deprived Brian can’t go five days.
This was a good story. I loved Brian in it. So very, very smitten.
A new enemy? Lordie, who can that be? Athough that Clive at the end, seemed pretty creepy. Looking forward to the sequel.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the story. I wrote this what seems a lifetime ago. I don't even remember all of the details now.
For sure, some adjustments need to be made for Brian's comfort. He could never endure five days without touching his little warlock.
Thank you for reading and for all of your comments. Always deeply appreciated!
Hugs,
Janet
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2021 4:29 am Title: Chapter 25
Well, it looks like everything has worked out perfectly. The guys are together. The evil witch is long gone. But how is Justin stronger? Because he can place spells?
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2021 4:28 am Title: Chapter 24
Evil Melanie. She really was bad. I wonder - has Justin gone through more than one family? For him to be so old, it almost seems like he’d live his life over and over. Or do witches get a certain age and then quit aging?
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2021 4:27 am Title: Chapter 23
Justin’s warlock powers must have emerged while he was taking Brian.
The shredded pillows were cute… I’m sure you watched the Twilight series. Their poor bed and bedding on their honeymoon.
Brian must have had a better bed than they used!
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Perhaps I did have Twilight in mind during the shredded pillows moment. That was a special moment in that series too. :)
Brian obviously has the strrongest of materials for his bed frame! Haha.
Thank you for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2021 4:25 am Title: Chapter 22
This is getting exciting. Brian is proving his feelings, and that sounds like that should make Justin know who he is… Sister Melanie better watch out!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aha! And that was the twist I thought was coming. But other than that, I’m still clueless what happens with the siblings. And why was Melanie led to believe Justin died at birth?
I’m glad that Justin went willingly with Brian. Even if he would have had to throw him over his shoulder, by the time anybody got outside, they’d have disappeared.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 20
Okay, first… I thought Michael was dead. The way his body fell to the ground when Melanie left it. But, I guess that didn’t kill him.
Justin was playing with Fire. He’s lucky those men didn’t force him, and drag him to the back alley.
And then, Brian on his knees, giving a blow-job. I REALLY hope Michael caught the highlights. That would be priceless. And Justin isn’t even aware he’s the first to have that. Although, I still think Brian is going to have to throw him over his shoulder and run!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
Little Justin is playing games with the big, bad Brian. And he is going to be so pissed when he walks into Babylon and sees other men’s hands on him. How is he supposed to contain his jealous rage then?
And our dear Melanie is almost worse than the wicked witch of the west! I wonder if her face is green. She’s so jealous, it just might be!
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 18
I think if it had just been Chris, Justin would haven’t reacted too badly. But as I said earlier, Ethan was innocent. Although I’m not certain Ethan was really innocent… he was arrogant and only cared about getting Justin in bed – but Justin didn’t really know all that.
But now I’m really worried about Melanie getting access to Justin.
I’m kind of starting to remember a twist, but maybe that won’t be true, either.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 17
So many twists and turns. And I really hope Lindsay is a true and honest friend. I think the knowledge of Brian killing Ethan is not going to have a good effect on Justin. Ethan was an innocent in Justin’s eyes, not a threat.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2021 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh boy, Chris Hobbs. A bad mix right there. But if Brian finds out and stashes Chris in his home, he can torture him before killing him, and there would be nothing that Melanie could do.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: Jul 26, 2021 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 15
It would be a smart move to stay at Brian’s. But during the day when Melanie inhabits another life form, can she get to Justin to harm him?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I am sure Melanie can still get into Justin's mind. Another spell would need to fully protect him, and one stronger than what Melanie can bring against him. Will that happen? I guess we will see. :)
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
There’s so many ways this is going and changing. But I still say, do not allow Justin to leave Brian’s place, unless Brian is with him.
And if Brian goes to sleep, and Justin decides to leave, what if he forgets to slip the ring on his finger?
Strange how two sisters are so very different.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Does Justin need some iron pills/shots?
That’s what I was wondering about Justin staying within Brian’s walls, so Melanie can’t help him. And I have to wonder if Justin and Brian, possibly Lindsay, really thinks of the curse, if they can't come up with that creed of B/J being able to destroy her.
When I think about the story being AU, definitely with Melanie loving and wanting Brian, it’s definitely a weird twist.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I went with the Melanie obsession with Brian as a very odd twist and something you don't see. We are accustomed to Mikey and/or Lindsay, so I thought it was a big twist too.
I have no doubt they will construct a plan to combat the evil witch. They just have to put all of the pieces together. :)
Thanks for commenting!
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
So Brian is aware of the ring's power. And now Justin is no longer a virgin. And wouldn’t he be safer to stay at Brian’s with the house safe from Melanie? Will he be protected without the ring though? Even in Brian’s house?
And it sounds like ol Mikey is dead. Too bad, but no real lose there. If Melanie would inhabit all the bad people, when she left their bodies, they’d be gone. Nice way to clean up the city.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
The ring is vital to fully protecting Justin from Melanie's power. Even in the house she can still reach him on a mental level.
That's a good one! LOL. A very nice way to clean up the city.
Thanks for commenting.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
Is Brian aware of the ‘soulmate’ theory? Does Lindsay know?
Well, those boys sure are getting along very nicely. Poor little Justin, is soon no longer gonna be a virgin at this rate.. And didn’t I say they wouldn’t get any work done?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Haha. I don't think the painting was really high on Brian's list of 'things to do.' I think we know precisely what or WHO he planned on doing in those sessions!
Thanks for commenting, Cathy.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Really? Sex before work? Hmm, just so Justin doesn’t get too tired out.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
I hope everything is on the up and up. I hope Lindsay is totally honest and not holding anything back.
It was good for Ethan to have such a quick death, but it might have been fun to see him suffering a little.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2021 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
At least Brian knows what’s happening now so that he will be able to take the correct steps to protect Justin. I look forward to finding out the reason all this was started in the first place.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ah shucks, it’s not really Michael. When Michael thought he’d take a trick to the backroom, I was hoping he’d show up empty, and get Ethan.
My question though is, when was Michael killed? Was it AFTER he watched Brian and Justin head to the backroom? Or is his body just inhabited? Don’t they have to be dead to do that though?
Questions, questions...
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
I think witches can just inhabit a body, he could still be alive. His free will is just overtaken by the magic. I guess there are no rules, and since this was my first paranormal QAF story, I had my own special rules for different things.
And yes, this story does have a lot of questions. Hopefully, I did answer them all by the end of the story!
Thanks for commenting!
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
When Brian told Ethan he wanted him to go to the backroom with a guy, and then another one, my first thought was: Brian’s going to have to manipulate some men into wanting to do that… then I thought: I hope Mikey gets lucky! LOL… (I’m so mean!)
I have mixed feelings about Brian giving Justin E, but if he doesn’t take advantage of that...
But it will be interesting to see the happenings in the backroom.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Argh! It’s been way too long since I read this story. Does Brian know of the witch's curse and all it entails? Does he remember who turned him? I know these are questions you can’t really answer, but… whatever.
Does the ring help him resist Brian, or just protect him from the witch?
I can hardly wait to see who Brian fixes Ethan up with tonight, or won't Ethan even go in the doors because of no free pass?
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
So many great questions, and yeah, you're right, I can't answer them in the case someone finds this story for the first time and reads the comments. :)
The ring is a lot about protection from the witch...but all should be revealed in time.
You know Brian probabaly won't fix Ethan up with anyone good. Our Brian is a bit twisted that way - haha.
Thanks for commenting!
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian’s lucky that not ALL his body fluids worked on humans like his blood. He’d be controlling them all.
But finally, Ethan won’t be a problem, because if he is… Brian will do more than just TALK to the slimeball.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Shucks. Brian didn’t have to just say you might survive the night. Hell, get rid of the creep. Send him off to a foreign land or something. A one-way ticket and then he wouldn’t be able to afford a way back.
And talk about two morons. If he plans to keep Ethan around. Mikey’s a good choice. They’re both losers. And Mikey deserved that for his comment he made about Brian failing.
I hope that smidgen of Brian’s blood will start working in Justin soon.
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2021 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah, a wonderful friend in Daphne… and someone who detests Ethan. He’s the most arrogant person I know. Maybe he’s not being signed because he’s not as good as he thinks, and maybe it’s because his attitude stinks.
And I’m really looking forward to Brian’s private talk with the chin rat.
HUGS,
Cathy
Author's Response:
Daphne is a gem. I can't say how much I love her. I often go into a story planning to make her a huge part of the story, but I get sidetracked by all of our boys' adventures. LOL. Maybe one day I will remember that early thought!
Thanks for commenting!
:)