Date: Feb 06, 2022 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi Paul! I've seen that you published several others of your stories. So, this one. As always very well written and yeah, I agree, your story is true-to-character Brian. That's what he would do in his misery. I have to say, I love this scene in Babylon. Do I feel a little sorry for Brian? He wouldn't want that anyway. ;-) But I think it's great that you also showed that it can happen that way and that not every man falls immediately on their knees in front of him, either to suck him or to be fucked by him. Great. There are also men who would rather have something with Justin. As a big Justin-Fan I love that. The bath-scenes... I don't know. Is that still pain-management? But it is true to his character. I love Brian, really, and I love the picture of this onion which you once described, but in my opinion he really needs therapy.
Thanks for sharing this story! I'm looking forward to read some of the others. Some I won't read. As I told you in one of my reviews before, I'm just not interested in all these fucking between Brian and other men. You've complained that some readers have complained that some of your stories don't feature Justin. I'm not complaining. I can also imagine that Brian has been in love or been involved with one or more other men in his past - maybe not. There are so many posibilities how Brian's past has unfolded. And I loved both "Prometheus Unbound" and "Requiem". Very well written. Very realistic. I loved that you wrote it from the point of view of the present and always put in those little romantic moments regarding Justin somewhere. So don't get me wrong, I won't read for example "Rumours" not because I find it kind of bad that Brian has sex with other men or that Justin doesn't appear in it. I won't read it, because I'm just not interested in Brian fucking lots of other men. But I think you are a very good writer and very talented. Warmest regards!
Date: Feb 06, 2022 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, and I forgot to ask... Was that Justin on the answering machine? Maybe I'll find out by reading Justin's aftermath... ;-)
Date: Jan 28, 2022 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Rotten, Mikey. Gets his digs in whenever.
Author's Response:
I think my story is true-to-character. Don't you?