Date: Aug 01, 2016 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 14 My little Runaway
This is hilarious, as the rest for sure:
“I just can’t wait for Brian to take me there. I’m going to have so much fun decorating. Apparently it’s so big that I will have lots of space for my comic memorabilia. Ooh, maybe I can theme each room for a superhero! That would be soooo amazing!”
“Yeah, that’s fucking likely” Debbie snorted. “Mr Designer Label would have a coronary if he saw your toys around the place. I know you were hypnotised, but you can’t be THAT fucking clueless”
Date: Aug 01, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 13 Memories Part 3
I loved how Michael went ballistic when Emmett told him Brian fucked him years ago.
Date: Aug 01, 2016 5:27 am Title: Chapter 9 The Plot Thickens Part 2
Emmett took a deep breath and said, “...so that I could counteract the effect gravity has on my ass.”
I could have sprayed my tea as well if it was 2sec earlier or later.Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens Part 1
Yeah, She/He is here; that was the only '"logical" explanation: Mysterious Marilyn.
Brian doesn't really like when we talk down about his dick.
I loved:
“That lying piece of shit! I have never, NEVER, had a problem keeping an erection. I have stellar, awesome, rock-hard erections – the erections of champions, of fucking gods. I could totally get it up for Mel! Put that bitch back on the phone!” Brian yelled as he tried to pull the phone away from Justin without much success.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 Woodies
I was afraid Ben and Brian would end at the hospital too.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 6 Sh%t just got real
I never laughed that much or maybe with "Thanksgiving Day Disaster by 7wildwaysup". I had to stop reading several times but it was so worth it!!!!
I loved so many parts and they were soooo funny:
- “Well,” said Emmett, revelling in the gossip he was about to pass along, “...Michael asked me if I would help him walk over to Teddy’s room so they could talk. And I wanted two of my dearest friends to reconcile, so I agreed.” Not to mention, if the ‘reconciliation’ went badly, Emmett would have a front-row ticket to Round Two of Dumb vs. Dumber, Justin thought cynically.
- “But when we got to the room…,” Emmett continued breathlessly,”...Teddy took one look at Michael and threw a vase of flowers at us. Thankfully, I managed to duck, as I’m very flexible,” Emmett congratulated himself. “But Michael, well, he wasn’t so lucky. But no worries; the doctors think they can straighten out this new break to his nose in no time at all.”
- Brian fucked them to ‘pass the time?’ Brian wouldn’t fuck them to save his life. Justin reacted angrily to Emmett’s fucked up logic, but he held his tongue.
- “Although Michael wants to change the name. He can’t decide between Kinnotny Castle and Novinney Manor.”
- But trust me, if you say one more word against Brian, you’ll be in the hospital yourself, having my shoe surgically removed from your ass! ARE WE CLEAR?
- Melanie whirled around at the sound. She stood there, bare-ass naked, with the exception of wearing a vomit-green, 12-inch, strap-on dildo, and a battered pair of Dr. Martin’s on her feet. Putting her hands on her hips, she glared at Justin and Debbie, annoyed at having been interrupted. “Would you mind leaving?” she said sharply. “Brian and I are trying to have a private, romantic moment here!”
- “Jesus, Melanie! You look like a fucking snowman with a hard-on!”
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:23 pm Title: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream
Hilarious!!!
I loved: “Well...” Mel continued “...to put it bluntly Justin, I’m having some issues with Brian’s dick”
As if Brian wouldn't have any problem with her...Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 Detective Sunshine
The third was not Emmett... I wouldn't have guessed it would be Melanie.
Well done!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 3 Confession
You really know how to put some pressure in your story!
Very entertaining and soooooo funny! I was laughing alone in front of my PC for a few minutes.
I loved:
- His performance was sadly cut short however when Ted, witnessing this romantic moment between Michael and HIS lover, walked calmly over to Michael and clobbered him with his briefcase. Brian watched in horrified fascination as Michael’s dazed face slid down the windshield, as if in slow motion, and ultimately ended up lying in the street in front of Brian’s car.
- Jennifer had tried to state the matter delicately when she’d described his injury as a ‘dislocation of the testicle’. Which meant Michael had kicked Ted so hard in the balls, that one of them was now lodged in his abdomen. He was currently in surgery to see if they could retrieve his errant nut.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 Oh Double F$#K
WHAT? Ted now? Poor Brian, he's going to self register to a psychiatric hospital if Emmett appears saying the same thing...
I loved:
“I don’t care if it’s Wonder Pussy and Super Twat, you won’t be able to find the pieces of their dismembered asses if you don’t get yours OUTTA THIS LOFT”
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Oh F$#K!
Very intriguing beginningn and eww...
Can't wait to see what really happended.
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2016 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 14 My little Runaway
Blake is the star of this chapter. He may not have learned yet how to defy Debbie when she makes demands, but he's got Ted down pat. Evil genus indeed.
Author's Response:
Thanks yumyum. Blake is gonna have to deal with more shit from Ted before this is resolved so his evil genius skills will come in handy
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2016 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 13 Memories Part 3
Can't say I blame Justin for being paranoid. But at least we know that they finally make it to Britin. Michael is deranged. Learning that Emmett does indeed know Brian in a way that he never has and never will went ballistic. He should be put away instead of handcuffed to a radiator.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 14 My little Runaway
OMG!!!! Poor Brian but JUSTIN!! OH, Justin's reactions had me just about to pee in my pants! Usually it's Justin calming Brian down so it's nice to see it happen the other way around. Michael, Michael, MICHAEL!!!! OMG, couldn't you just lock him up in a kennel until the spell wears off? Even though I love to see him get his ass kicked both physically and metaprically, at this point I think it will be the ONLY thing that saves his life should he get free and show up at Britin. Justin is already just about at the end of his rope; he doesn't need an assault charge. LOL You came back to this in a BIG way and I'm so happy you did!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Haha Michael in a kennel. Why didn't I think of that? Unfortunately, he wont stay locked up for long. I think Justin may very well kill him.
Date: May 22, 2016 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 14 My little Runaway
Love the story! Laughed so hard I cried especially the situations with Mel. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Lorna. Mel is in the nxt chpt so hope you enjoy it
Date: May 21, 2016 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 10 The Plot Thickens Part 3
well - that explains things...great plot development - and typical Brian!
Charle
Author's Response:
Yep, Brian is his own worst enemy. I cant wait til he gets his hands on Miguel
Date: May 21, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens Part 1
...and there we are! After quite a few more laugh out loud moments, just who I was expecting. At least I got that part right!
Now to find out about the rest...reading on.
Charle
Date: May 21, 2016 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 6 Sh%t just got real
oh, my dear Kearney - I didn't think anyone other than Tag had the ability to make me laugh hard enough to spit out my food (you may notice we occasionally get warnings now) - but this has had me laughing out loud and my whole family is looking at me like I've gone daft
I have no idea where you are going with this - but I can't wait to find out! In the meantime, I'm not sure if Brian's reactions or the families fighting comments and actions are more comical...and don't even get me started on how hot Justin is when he's in 'protect my man' mode.
This story is a hoot! Have a feeling Mysterious Marilyn won't be far away. Gotta' get back to reading - can't think of a better way to spend my Saturday afternoon that reading more of this!
Welcome to KD, and welcome to writing. This story is just the breath of fresh air we all need as KD takes off. So glad you're here.
Charle
Author's Response:
Wow Charle. What a massive compliment . Thanks so much. I'm beavering away at the next chpt as I type this, and such lovely comments inspire me to keep going.
And yes, Marilyn is involved. With this level of fuckery, she'd have to be really 😆
Kearney
Date: May 21, 2016 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 13 Memories Part 3
So now the truth is out. Of course Mikey doesn't believe it. Why would he? Interesting to note that Emmett's had Brian when Mikey hasn't. <snicker> After all it was before they became friends and was never repeated. I'm sure Justin will understand once he learns of it.
Author's Response:
I cant tell you what it means for you to comment so frequently. I love hearing your thoughts as you go through each chpt. I doubt justin will be the least bit bothered about Brian and emmett.
New chpt coming soon.
Kearney
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 12 Memories Part 2
From where I'm sitting, they had so choice but to steal Carl's car. No choice at all.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 Memories Part 1
So now we know your secret identity, Justin. BTW where was Deb during all this? The only sane person is Carl. The next chapter should be really interesting.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 10 The Plot Thickens Part 3
It's obvious whose fault this all is. Michael!!!! If he hadn't insisted that Brian go out with them, Brian wouldn't have recognized Miguel and called him on it making him get revenge. Love your little cliffy.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 The Plot Thickens Part 2
You and Marilyn have a lot in common. Love how you had him er her? describe the four wayward travelers.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens Part 1
Mysterious Marilyn!!! Hurrah! Now we'll get somewheres. I hope Justin lets Emmett have it for giving Brian a lot of E. Not a good idea at all.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 7 Woodies
Love, love, love a protective Justin.