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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2022 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow

FANTASTIC

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2022 10:33 am Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow

At one point I was holding my breath.  Wow. 



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BREATHE! TAG

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2022 1:56 am Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow

It's sure that after this big fright and the adrenaline rush, the wedding night is going to be torrid. I'm counting on you to finish in style!



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We aim to please... TAG

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2022 12:43 am Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow

I presume you took some inspiration from 50's madcap comedies and the typical french/english farce?  This chapter was totally excellent!  And as we know there always has to be one dumb relative/friend who is completely clueless as to what is happening and bumbles about incoherently, Michael plays that part so well!

Thanks guys, 

Deb l.



Author's Response:

We were going for a Much Ado About Nothing/Midsummer Nights Dream craziness. But the 50's madcap comedies would be the same vibe. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2022 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow

Nothing better than an accidental wedding! I wonder if Brian and Justin even realize it, LOL!

I would definitely watch that Bond movie!



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I love me a good accidental wedding too! TAG

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