[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2022 1:56 am Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow
It's sure that after this big fright and the adrenaline rush, the wedding night is going to be torrid. I'm counting on you to finish in style!
Author's Response:
We aim to please... TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2022 12:43 am Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow
I presume you took some inspiration from 50's madcap comedies and the typical french/english farce? This chapter was totally excellent! And as we know there always has to be one dumb relative/friend who is completely clueless as to what is happening and bumbles about incoherently, Michael plays that part so well!
Thanks guys,
Deb l.
Author's Response:
We were going for a Much Ado About Nothing/Midsummer Nights Dream craziness. But the 50's madcap comedies would be the same vibe. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Jun 17, 2022 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Try The Fair Adventure of Tomorrow
Nothing better than an accidental wedding! I wonder if Brian and Justin even realize it, LOL!
I would definitely watch that Bond movie!
Author's Response:
I love me a good accidental wedding too! TAG
Date: Jun 16, 2022 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Best Safety Lies In Fear
the funniest part was knowing laura was calling mike a blabbermouth without the translation
Author's Response:
YES! We were so excited to find the Croatian word for Blabbermouth! And it's one of those words that just sounds like it's meaning. It was perfect, right? LOL. TAG
Date: Jun 15, 2022 4:21 am Title: Chapter 22 - Who Wooed in Haste
Great chapter. You guys covered so much. It was a good thing Laura was there or who knows what could have been done to Brian.
Author's Response:
Trying to cram so much story into so few chapters... Gotta cover a lot! Glad you enjoyed! TAG
Date: Jun 14, 2022 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Who Wooed in Haste
I am surprised Justin has been able to control himself with all the "bride" nonsense. I would've lost it already, LOL! And the Daphne imitation is perfect!
I'm glad Laura has become an ally. The good guys are gaining strength!
Brian can come do turn-down service for me anytime, LOL!
Date: Jun 14, 2022 12:38 am Title: Chapter 22 - Who Wooed in Haste
Yes I want to see Brian in a maid outfit! I hope Aleski's end is near now that Laura will help too.
Author's Response:
LOL! I wasn't sure when Lorie had the suggestion for the maid outfit, but after we wrote it, I loved it! Glad you did too! TAG
Date: Jun 14, 2022 12:19 am Title: Chapter 21 - Whether You Will Or No
I'm scared for Justin!!
Date: Jun 12, 2022 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Whether You Will Or No
Such a beautiful place... maybe Brian and Justin will have time to enjoy it for real at some point? Huh? Maybe?
Like Brian, I am not comfortable with being separated from Justin. Aleksi needs to be taken down ASAP!
Author's Response:
Maybe... You never know! TAG
Date: Jun 08, 2022 12:45 am Title: Chapter 20 - Wing The Midway Air
You guys are so bad. I am surprised Michael wasn't listening at the door.
Author's Response:
We really ARE bad. But you love us like this... TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2022 2:23 am Title: Chapter 20 - Wing The Midway Air
It was hot ! I can't wait to be at the wedding although I don't think it will go as well as we think,especially with you two LOL.
Author's Response:
You know us well... TAG
Date: Jun 06, 2022 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Wing The Midway Air
Another excelllent chapter. I hope Brian lets Justin know that his feelings are real and that the wedding or something that would keep them together is something he wants.
Author's Response:
We're getting them there. You know Brian needs to be led gently into these things. Lol. TAG
Date: Jun 06, 2022 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Wing The Midway Air
Oh, damn! Extra chapters??? How will we ever survive, LOL!
That was certainly a 5-star worthy performance for admitance to the mile-high club!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I know you hate long fics with too much sex. I'll try to do better next time. ???? TAG
Date: Jun 05, 2022 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 19 - What We May Be
This is a much better version of Ninety-day Fiance, LOL! I'd actually watch this one!
Author's Response:
Right? Us too! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2022 10:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - Would We Were All Of One Mind
I just read this from start to finish and I'm loving it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hugs Darlings ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Thank you. We're working on the splashy fun ending. Hang on! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2022 12:44 am Title: Chapter 18 - Would We Were All Of One Mind
The girls are efficient!!
Author's Response:
Of course! Two women attorneys - they're gonna get shit done! TAG
Date: Jun 01, 2022 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Would We Were All Of One Mind
So many good things about this chapter. I liked this side of Mel where she is almost liking Brian. I cn see Brian and Justin getting married and deciding to see where it might actually going. such a fun story and I'm enjoying the build up.
Author's Response:
Personally, I like seeing a more complex Mel character and this fit the bill. But no fair reading ahead in our brains to the ending... TAG
Date: Jun 01, 2022 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Would We Were All Of One Mind
Whew! Well, I'm glad the boys are getting some backup help dealing with Aleksi! And, I for one, can't wait to see Brian and Justin actually get married, LOL!
Author's Response:
We have (almost) all the pieces and characters in place. It's gonna take a lot to keep our boys safe from a bad guy like Aleksi. No fair jumping ahead to the HEA ending already though... TAG
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2022 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10 - Made With The Fume Of Sighs
Jesus Christ that was hot
Author's Response:
Glad we could help. *wink* TAG
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2022 5:25 am Title: Chapter 9 - Mine Eye Hath Played The Painter
Urgh, and Michael comes along and ruins a good story haha. Glad Brian told him where to go.
Date: May 30, 2022 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 - In Nothing Else So Happy
Well, that first part certainly added to the day's heat!
Not sure what evil you have planned for our boys... but I still think that maybe Beks might actually be part of the solution.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2022 10:02 am Title: Chapter 17 - In Nothing Else So Happy
Mmm... the plot thickens!
Still loving this story.
Thanks
Deb L.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2022 2:24 am Title: Chapter 17 - In Nothing Else So Happy
I hope Becs and Melanie will find a solution to stop Aleksi's actions and save Kinnetik and everyone.
Date: May 24, 2022 3:01 am Title: Chapter 16 - Clean Enough To Spit Upon
Love the story! Just hope that Micheal step on some dog shit and slip the next he walk down the liberty avenue!
Date: May 23, 2022 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Clean Enough To Spit Upon
Wonder how Justin can sit in the diner booth, LOL!
Not sure if I should be concerned that Justin didn't tell Brian that Gus also knows he can speak English.
I think Beks is going to end up being a bit of a hero before this is all done!