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Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2022 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Faithful Friends Are Hard To Find.

Poor Justin, Brian is such a tease.

I am not confident in Gus keeping a secret this big but will be proud of him if he does lol.

I am so worried about their safety though :(

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2022 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Kill All The Lawyers

Hahahaha Justin pretending to not understand him is so funny.

I didn't see this coming with Alexsi, I thought he was just a weird man that wanted to make Brian happy with a wife, but he is determined to find out everything and ruin him. Why?

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2022 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 - An Open Arse

Finally , must have more. I am sure the guys will be fine now that they have TALKED. I just want Mikey to get into trouble for his shit !

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2022 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Toil and Trouble

I hate The Weasel so much....idiot

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2022 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - An Open Arse

Finally Hooray !!!!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2022 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 15 - An Open Arse

I have to say, I am going to miss all the fun teasing and sexual innuendo... just a little bit.

But the heat from a Brian and Justin just burns though the screen!!! 

And now that the big secret is out, can't wait to see where this leads next! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2022 2:17 am Title: Chapter 14 - Toil and Trouble

It's really time for our boys to talk to each other because Michael is going to make things worse.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2022 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Good and Ill Together

Yes, there was plot... but there was also teasing Justin, snarky Ted, and a slightly testy Brian, so it's all good, LOL!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2022 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Too Wise To Woo Peaceably

Just what I needed on this cold, rainy, dreary Saturday! 

Reviewer: Juditka Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2022 6:57 am Title: Chapter 11 - Tonight Let Us Assay Our Plot

I love this story. Funny, sexy. I look forward to continuing.    

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2022 1:34 am Title: Chapter 11 - Tonight Let Us Assay Our Plot

I hope soon Justin and Brian will talk to each other. Aleksi is scary!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2022 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Tonight Let Us Assay Our Plot

WooHoo! Congrats on reaching your goal! It's been a fun ride so far... and I'm sure there's much more tom come!

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2022 12:43 am Title: Chapter 10 - Made With The Fume Of Sighs

Jebati indeed! ;) Loved all the Gus cuteness, and the hot teasing from B/J. I especially loved the table frotting... *whew*!!  I do remember a foot job scene of sorts from the movie "Flashdance"... Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing your Nanowrimo! Other ideas... time for more like a hand job, etc. Also would love to read more about the "mystery" despite their brief respite of safety. :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2022 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Made With The Fume Of Sighs

The physics of sex is absolutely brilliant. 



Author's Response:

YES! Another science nerd has entered the chat! LOL! Glad you liked it! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2022 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Made With The Fume Of Sighs

I think the science nerd was very "Justin," LOL! I can absolutley believe S1 Justin would have that same kind of mind drift!

The "toe job" scene reminded me of the scene in Babylon where the two of them were having a more G rated game of footsie.

 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2022 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mine Eye Hath Played The Painter

I want Gus's beanbag!

I don't think it will be very long now before Youstin starts his own campaign of revenge, LOL! 

 

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2022 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mine Eye Hath Played The Painter

What a cute scene, cooking and painting! Loved the hot scene with Brian pressed up against Justin. ;) Hope there is more of that, but anticipating them finally getting to the bedroom... at least getting to the next base... Can't wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

We can promise a lot more HOT scenes to come. But until Justin comes clean and admits his secret to Brian, Brian's not likely to take him to bed... More soon! TAG

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2022 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Mine Eye Hath Played The Painter

Loved the mural and the fact they all worked on it.....Justin must tell Brian or they will never to get to Brian's bed

Author's Response:

Yay! We're so glad you liked 'our' mural. LOL. And, yes, they'll eventually get to Brian's bed but . . . Stay tuned! TAG 

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2022 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Faithful Friends Are Hard To Find.

Gus is adorable and is keeping Justin's secret.

Author's Response:

Gus *IS* adorable! TAG

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2022 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8 - Faithful Friends Are Hard To Find.

I posted a review on this chapter but somehow it errored out. Oops! I adored this chapter too, with Gus along it makes it more heartwarming and hilarious. As a dad, Brian is an old softie! LOL How nice that Justin will create a nice mural in Gus' room. I wonder if Gus will blab to Brian, but I think Justin's the only one now that doesn't know everything. :) Re: ideas on how Brian can tease Justin, how about something in the kitchen/cooking/delayed gratification situations? After all Gus will need to be asleep for anything else to occur, for sexytime lol Cannot wait for the next chapter!! xo

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2022 12:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - Two Or Three Probable Lies

Holy moly... Justin has more self-control than I would have with a hot Brian teasing... LOL *shiver* My favorite phrase... "seduce the truth out of his visitor". Poor Justin!! :D

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2022 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Confusion Now Hath Made

ROFLOL!!! Naughty naughty, Brian... although the jig is up and Justin has some 'splaining to do! Now I'm a bit worried for the boys on what Brian's client will do...

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2022 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Drink Down All Unkindness

Hot!! Whew!! This is amazing...

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2022 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Fame For A Pot of Ale

This is amazing, I'm really enjoying the story so far... :) This whole situation is hilarious, and I can't wait to read what these two will do next. The scene at the diner was so funny, with the guys giving Brian a hard time about his "husband" (hee hee), and Justin playing dumb and acting like he only spoke Croatian. lol

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2022 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - We May Be Better Strangers

I'm drooling over Brian's new abode... wow! As far as Justin is concerned, how amusing that Brian happened to get a gorgeous blond more his style, lol. Can't wait to read more to see what happens next... which I'll do now! lol



Author's Response:

We had so much fun finding him a new house. Glad you approve. Happy reading. TAG

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