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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2022 11:03 am Title: Chapter 13

A palace for his prince...and family. Brian is so head over heels. Good for him.

Justin is really from Darumor? As in "Da'rumor is the prince is gay?"

Have a feeling, Jennifer may follow her son. Time will tell.



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is most definitely in love and finally going for it ;) 

Hah, I never thought of that lol Good one!

We will definitely hear more from her, but will it be good? Only time will tell...

Thanks for your comment! 

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2022 11:27 am Title: Chapter 13

Hey! I finally started watching the 4th season of "The Handmaid's Tale" a few days ago and what can I say.... I can't stop and it's so nice not to have to wait a week for the next episode.... ;-) But... Two things... 1. Where are Brian and Justin? Haha During the first two episodes I constantly had this strong need to see them. And you're to blame (don't take me too seriously), because the last time I dealt with Gilead was while reading your story. 2. Well, I thought Elisabeth Moss was terrible in the first seasons, but for me it's getting nearly unbearable. These eternally long camera shots on her face, her slightly cross-eyed look, oh, her whole facial expression annoys me so unspeakably... If I didn't find the series so good in itself....


But now to your chapter. Wow! What an absolutely beautiful chapter. "It's for my prince" You give this whole scene a whole new meaning. And how fitting! Did the idea for this story come to you while watching this scene or did you have the idea for this story first and then thought this scene would fit in? And actually so much nicer that it's not about a stupid wedding, but first about a real relationship. Imo, that also would have been so much better for Brian and Justin in QAF, but whatever. But after I read it, I had to make sure that this wasn't the last chapter. It felt a little bit like it. And I was happy and felt relieved that it still goes on. Looking forward to Sunday! Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Haha, I just started on the fifth season on Friday. Amazon Prime here uploaded the first episode :) 

Personally, I don't really mind Elizabeth Moss too much. I think her acting is pretty decent on the show, but yeah, I know what you mean about those shots. Some of those choices are...questionable ;) 

I am glad that you liked the use of that line. It just seemed too perfect not to use ;) I had the idea for the story first and when I was writing it, I remembered Brian's line "for my prince" which I always found incredibly weird...He had never called Justin prince before and it was the only time and completely out of the blue and I wasn't a fan of that particular pet name, but in this case it fit perfectly, so I thought: Why not? ;) 

This isn't the last chapter by far. There is still a lot more to come :)

As always, thanks for your comment, More will be up later today! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2022 12:48 am Title: Chapter 13

The 511 is one of my favorite episodes and where I stop watching the series. So finding this dialogue that sounds so good in the situation of your story was magic! Thank you for this story and let's see how their lives will evolve.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the use of those specific lines :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2022 8:42 am Title: Chapter 13

 

 

 

wonderful, just wonderful



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will be up later today!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2022 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 13

Nice job fitting in the 'for my prince' scene! Kudos. TAG



Author's Response:

It just seemed to fit so perfectly ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today! 

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2022 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

Love that you used the for you prince line…can’t wait for more.

Author's Response:

It just seemed to fit so perfectly ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today!

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