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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2023 9:36 am Title: Chapter 26

Cliffhanger.  Love it.  



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Thanks for the comment. More will be up in a bit :) 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2023 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 26

The Queen Mother is about to make het Grand Entrance!

Time for Jennifer to meet the one man who isn't afraid to tell her where she can go and how fast to get there.

This Showdown Is Going To Be Good!!!

Thanks For The Update



Author's Response:

I am not sure your showdown is going to happen, but we'll see ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up in a bit!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2023 12:38 am Title: Chapter 25

Hi again! Thank you for another beautiful chapter! Even though I don't like Lindsay in general, I'm more of a harmony person and so I'm glad that Justin went to see Lindsay and thus accommodated her and gave her an opportunity to apologize. After this "12 months later" and the positive development you described, I had to briefly make sure that your story is not over yet.... ;-) Since it is not over yet, I suspect that the trouble will not be over either.... Warmest regards!



Author's Response:

Haha, no, the story is not over yet. There is still more to come for our boys. But they deserved some happiness before I send the next trouble their way :P 

Let's see what they will have to face next. 

More will be up tomorrow :) As always, thanks for your comment - it's much appreciated!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2023 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 25

Life is getting better for Brian and Justin and now they are getting out and living life on their terms with total freedom ANF a whole lot of protection from Liberty Avenue.

Everyone is happy for Brian and Justin.



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They deserve some happiness after everything they have been through :) But will it last?!?

More will be up tomorrow. Thanks for your comment :) 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2023 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 24

Lindsay really should have been smarter when it concerns her parents they are the worse kind of leeches, surprised Lynette wasn't there trying to get her hooks in as well?

Justin was smart by going the wait staff route they truly know everything that goes down and are always ignored unless someone needs another drink, complain about their meal or blamed Gor a broken nail.

Lindsay allowed herself to be played but Brian and Justin had the situation well in hand and had all the aces.

Thanks for the Update

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2023 3:35 am Title: Chapter 25

All is well in the world of Liberty Avenue. Now that the two years have passed (if I understood correctly?) there will be a reaction from the "royalty" part. I think she might bring some trouble.



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You are on the right track here... That's all I will say for now :P

More will be up tomorrow :) Thanks!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2023 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 25

Lindsay got off her high horse, Justin got the life he wanted. All seems right in their world.

Great chapter. The end, to me, gave me a feeling that there is a BUT waiting in the wings. 



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Isn't there always a but? ;)

I guess we'll find out soon what they will have to face next.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2023 10:11 am Title: Chapter 25

 

 

 

what a wonderful chapter.  could see it so clearly in my mind.  Love these people so much, that they seem real.  Great writing.



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I am glad that you're still enjoying the story :)

Thanks for letting me know! More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2023 7:01 am Title: Chapter 24

Hi! Thanks for another chapter. Oh, I didn't expect this twist - that Lindsay's parents would play a role here. What they did is really pathetic and if I would like Lindsay, I might feel sorry for her. Except, unfortunately, I don't like her.... So, looking forward to Sunday and warmest regards!



Author's Response:

I am glad that I am still able to surprise people even now ;)

This just seemed like something those horrible people would do to better their own positions... grr!

Lindsay was definitely naive here. I can't say that I feel sorry for her either though. I just don't like her enough.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up in a bit :) 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2023 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh those rotten Petersons.  Great writing.



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I am glad you liked the chapter :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up in a bit!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2023 2:22 am Title: Chapter 24

Lindsay's disappointment was predictable. After so many years still having illusions about this sudden change in her parents, as Brian would say it's pathetic. Brian and Melanie (and Justin) working together to make her see reality was surprising but necessary and effective.



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Lindsay was definitely naive to trust them :( 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2023 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 24

Bravo on knocking Lindsay's parents off their high horse. Of all the nerve to try and use Gus. Lindsay will need therapy after this debacle.



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I really disliked Lindsay's parents on the show - they make for perfect bad guys ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up shortly!

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2023 7:32 am Title: Chapter 23

Hej! I also wish you a healthy and happy New Year! No, I do not like all this "böllern" either. And well, these terrible events that have happened in Berlin, make one just speechless...

So, thank you for another chapter! It made me sad that Justin got so little attention and recognition for his art. But I think that's exactly how it would be if there was an openly gay royal. While I was reading the chapter, it was going through my head how different the real royals are acting right now. Well, I have no idea at all what is written and said there, because it really doesn't interest me at all, but I see these headlines in the "Spiegel" and other newspapers and I find it all just pathetic - here it's exactly the opposite than in your story... They want this attention! Pathetic... Well, I'm curious about you story and how it continues, because that can not be it yet, or.... So, warmest regards and looking forward to Sunday!



Author's Response:

Yeah, what happened in Berlin was horrible...Some people...sometimes there are no words :( 

It's funny because due to recent headlines, I couldn't help compare this story to the real royals either. Same when I was writing it. Back then M&H were all about wanting their privacy and moving away from England to get that and I was like: Yep, I understand that. Justin basically did the same in this story. But now...I call bullshit! Sorry, but if you want your privacy, you don't write a book like that or give interviews like the Oprah one almost non-stop. 

Someone in another comment suggested that Brian and Justin should give an interview and I was like: No way! They want their privacy and MEAN it. They would never give an interview, even if it would help to clear up some headlines. They would rather do it in subtle ways like Brian and Daphne's lunch. A book or interview, though? Nope... If you want privacy, you have to be private. You can't wash your dirty laundry in public. That doesn't give you privacy...

I can promise the return of at least one part of the terrible two in the next chapter :P

Thanks for your comment. As always, it's much appreciated :) More will be up tomorrow! 

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2023 1:16 am Title: Chapter 23

Finally everything happened as their predictions but I'm afraid of dinner at Debbie's, the whole family will be exposed even Gus!!



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Let's hope that it will be fine and they can have their quiet, private life. 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2023 9:39 am Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter.  Sorry you are having problems with it. We will wait as long as it takes to get to the end.   It is a wonderful story.



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Thanks, I am glad that you liked it :)

Hopefully, the next chapter will be up tomorrow. It's time for at least part of the terrible two to strike :P

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2023 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 23

Al he wants Is an uncomplicated live while living in a fishbowl. 

I think the plan to show up wherever and whenever is a good one. Thanks Drew.



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin likes his privacy. All he wants is a quiet, private life with the people he loves. Hopefully, he can get it!

Thanks for your comment - it's much appreciated! More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2023 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 23

It was q very smart smooth of Brian and Daphne being seen out together enjoying lunch it was interesting and yet not very interesting, the press need a sensational story and they got it but not the way they wanted it.

If Justin, Brian and Daphne continue to play it this way the press will get bored quickly because everyone will get use to seeing them together.

Now as for Joan and Claire all Brian and Justin have to do is give jaw dropping interview and they will be destroyed, gotta take away their amo and stop them from making money off Brian and Justin's love and lives.

Michael and Lindsay are being too agreeable and quiet that is totally unlike them.

Thanks for the Update????

 



Author's Response:

Brian and Daphne are very smart ;) 

I don't think Brian and Justin are the type of people that would ever give an interview like that. They like their privacy and mean it... 

We'll here from one of the terrible twos very soon...

Thanks for your comment. It's much appreciated. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2022 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hi again! Are you still in Germany? Are you going to spend New Year's Eve here? It's crazy. Yesterday you could hear already so many fireworks being unleashed here in Berlin! I have the feeling that the fireworks ban of the last few years (and there was less here in Berlin) is now being made up for this year.

So, this chapter! It surely wasn't right that Justin didn't tell Brian about the investigations earlier, but I'm glad that such things can be discussed, at least after only a short time out and 2 glasses of Beam ;-) I'm glad that Justin has found such a good friend in Em. And I think I've written this twice now... It seems like the calm before the storm. Just now I have the feeling that a huge huge storm cloud is building up. I wish you a good start into the New Year!!!!



Author's Response:

Happy New Year! No, I flew back to Dublin on the 28th. I am not a big fan of New Year's and all the trara surrounding it, so usually flee Germany before it lol. It's a lot calmer and more laidback here in Dublin. Only one big fireworks display in the city center, but not much private 'böllern' which I am totally fine with ;)

There will be a storm coming - the question is, what side will it be coming from? Poor guys deserve a break...

I will try to get the next chapter up soon. I had trouble accessing this site for days now and today at work is the first time I have been able to open it in more than a week. And now I don't have the doc with the full story with me as that is on my private laptop at home*sighs* Hopefully, the site will still work for me when I get back home tonight!

The chapter is ready and I didn't abandon the story. It will be up as soon as technically possible ;)

Thanks for your comment. As always, it's much appreciated :)

 

Reviewer: werkarniggel Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2022 3:01 am Title: Chapter 22

Hey, I wish I knew how many chapters are left before the heppy ending. I am so excited to finally read the complete story, it seems right my cup of .... black coffee I need. :-) 



Author's Response:

There will still be some chapters to come. I don't have an exact number right now, as I don't have the full story document with me right now (I am at work on my work computer and it's on my private computer at home lol).

The story is finished and will be updated once a week - if the site allows me to ;) I've had trouble accessing the site in recent days, but will get the next chapter up as soon as possible!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2022 1:34 am Title: Chapter 22

They are ready for battle! Which side will the attack come from?



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Hopefully just from one side and not from several :(

Poor guys deserve a break!

Thanks for your comment, it's much appreciated! More will be up soon!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2022 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 22

This first appearance is not going to be easy for Brian and Justin but if they hold tight to each other they will weather this storm coming their way.

Michael and Lindsay will.definitely use this to Gey Brian yo get rid of Justin but the others will stand strong by Brian and Justin to help keep them safe.

Plus I am so itching for Daphne to take on those two but Justin and Brian step in.

Just wondering when Queen Jennifer makes her appearance and steps up to Brian now that will be a battle with the price of admission.

If Brian cam survive Jack and Joan as parents, Claire as his sister, Michael and Lindsay trying to control his life then he can survive the paparazzi and an Royal Queen.

Thanks for the Update

Happy Holidays????

 

 



Author's Response:

We are going to meet Queen Jennifer in this story, but it might still be a bit away ;)

Thanks for your comment, it's much appreciated. I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible, but I have had trouble accessing the site for days.

So, hopefully, soon!

Thanks :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2022 9:59 am Title: Chapter 22

 

GREAT CHAPTER.  so sad that they have to face the world with nasty people in it, but that is life. 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will hopefully be up soon, but I have had trouble accessing the site in recent days :(

Will get the next chapter up as soon as possible, I promise!

Thanks.

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2022 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 21

Wow! You've really already experienced / done a lot and I'm starting to believe that you really need a week's vacation first! I've got a week off now and I want to go to the cinema to see "Oskar's Dress", but other than that I'll just be relaxing for the most part.


This chapter: As always, well written! Lots of beautiful moments but also funny ones... "I think he likes it" - haha, the way you describe Gus reaction it is much more than liking. And this one "Is that French?" Hahaha! What should I say (He is and always will be an idiot). Oh, and Linds...really? If Brian kissed her in front of the children, she wouldn't say such bullshit.


So, I'm wishing you a very, very happy Christmas with your family and friends!!!



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the chapter :) 

Michael will always be Michael - he can't help it ;) 

The family and friends are showing their true colours now...

I hope you'll have a very happy Christmas with your loved ones as well :) Enjoy the holidays and enjoy your time off. 

More will be up tomorrow! :) 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2022 7:21 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.  



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will be up tomorrow! 

Happy holidays :)

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2022 2:01 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter. Everyone loves and accepts Justin except two (no surprise!). I am delighted you give space to Blake in this family. I like the story of Ted and Blake. I don't know if you celebrate but Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

I love Ted and Blake together and like Blake :) And much like Justin he was the new guy for a long time...

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :)

Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones!

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