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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2025 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow! So glad to see there's going to be another chapter! :D

At the end, I kept thinking that when Brian walked away - saying they could talk later - he'd turn around and give Justin a big kiss. (Yeah, I can always dream.)

Isn't it strange that Christmas wasn't in the show? Other than the fake one after Vic's death? Especially when the show lasted five years.

Your writing is very clean. I took a writing course years back, since I did a lot of beta work, so this is an added bonus to your stories.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

~Cathy



Author's Response: Yeah, there will be, maybe even two, let's see how well I can wrap up the story :D Oh that would be so good, I wish I had thought of that, but unfortunately it wouldn't fit the story at the moment... I'm sure they'll kiss soon though! It's totally strange! I never understood it either, it would be so great to have a real Christmas on the show! Thank you so much, it means the world to me, especially since English is not my first language and I really struggle with it sometimes :) And thank you for the comment!

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