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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2016 6:39 am Title: Chapter 22 - Two facets of Brian.

Still 4 days to wait and a few more till Christmas. Will Brian be really stupid and put his priority first and don't hire Justin and risk him to go to Vangard or another top agency?

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Justin takes Andrew out.

Now the date is known by both of them; I guess we just have to wait and to find a fan, just in case it becomes too heated.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 20 - All work and no play.

They both have a brain but sometimes, there is not enough blood irrigating it... Or it is because Justin is smaller and the circuit is shorter?

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 19 - A visit to Gillian’s.

I hope he was able to dream during the night so he could try to "live" what might have happened after that hot evening.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Showing his art.

It's sure is one big step for Justin: he enters the big league with this agent.

And Brian guessed what the last painting was about...

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Just can’t get enough.

Whoa, that was super hot; they know how to turn the heat at its maximum.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The ‘Fuel’ Campaign.

I loved Brian during photo shoot; I so would have love to see it...

Brian finally talks to Justin and confess about the kiss; he also praises Justin's work; I bet it's quite rare.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 14 - It pays to pay the doorman.

This second kiss........ self fan...

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Justin’s week from hell.

Moment of truth is coming right up: will Brian show up and if not, what was the reason?

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The ad executive’s week.

Some tension between the ad God and the intern: what will happen when they really talk if they do one day?

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 11 - After the Essengy kissing debacle.

Justin explaining his night to Daphne: too much fun; they make such a pair, it's amazing to read their exchanges.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Just a taste.

What a kiss!!!!

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Justin’s Thanksgiving in Pittsburgh.

Now that Justin has met Brian's family without realizing they are his family and Brandon, I can't wait to see what happen during Christmas' break...

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Brian's priorities.

Justin is becoming quite a valuable asset for Brian's job and Brian doesn't even know that it was him who prepared the layouts.

At least, they won't face each other in Babylon during Thanksgiving.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 6:00 am Title: Chapter 7 - Justin kicks ass.

I would like to know what Brian thought about the campaign Justin's designed; did he found out what Jutsin had "hidden"? What did he think about it?

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:45 am Title: Chapter 6 - On the phone with Daphne.

Ah, Daphne, the infamous fag hag: so good to read about her.

And yeah, right: "Complete Kinney blackout", as if he is not going to find Brian in Babylon and find out that Emmett and the gang are his friends.

Might be fun to read that.

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Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:37 am Title: Chapter 5 - Justin’s first month at Plexus.

Brilliant: you used some of the lines from S3 and created an interesting way to anchor Justin to Plexus.

And Brian finally connected 2 Justins: the one from LA and the one from NY; next step, will he connect them to the one from the Pitts? This could add to what he feels about Justin, in ref. to the bashing.

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Date: Jun 30, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A Conspiracy of Justins.

That teasing is joyful. Justin has definitely the upper hand until the end of his internship program, maybe?

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Date: Jun 30, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Justin’s first eight months in NY.

Hot teasing; I loved them when they "eye fuck", oblivious of their own tricks.

So glad to see that Daphne is back.

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Date: Jun 30, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Life of Brian.

Ha ha ha!!! Poor Brian, too bad the "trick" isn't really one. He will have to find a way to change that. What a challenge!

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Date: Jun 30, 2016 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Getting the hell out of LA.

Interesting and intriguing start!

I loved the wolf reference; Brian's curiosity is on high level...

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Date: Jun 04, 2016 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 35 - The talk.

I enjoyed reading this story so much!! I read it right through and forgot all about leaving comments!!

It has all the elements I like, Great job!  On to the sequel now :)

Edda

 

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 35 - The talk.

*drool* Hot diggity damn, I can't get enough of Justin and Brian together.

Just the way it should be: Brian taking as much pleasure in Justin topping him as he does in topping Justin.

So sweet (yes, Brian, I'm using that word) that Brian's jealous of Brandon. The rules are definitely as much, if not moreso, for Brian than they are for Justin.

You realize you're forcing me to immediately start reading "Together", right? You evil author who writes unputdownable stories. ;)

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Date: May 27, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Chilling thoughts.

Brian sitting outside on the balcony, naked, in the freezing cold gives me the chills. He's really exteme with himself (mostly necessary), but a promise he makes to himself is one he won't break (any more than he'd break a promise to someone else).

It's tremendous that every time Brian makes love to Justin, he wants to skip the condom. He's getting prepared!

*swoon* You really make me picture Justin and Brian together. They're so very beautiful.

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Date: May 27, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Blond and brain damaged, but no pushover.

Have I said how much I love Daphne? She's always there for Justin and gives great advice.

Even without Daphne's input, Justin would have realized (if not quite as soon) that he didn't want to lose his self-respect, and that he needed to talk to Brian to figure out the parameters of their relationship.

It was great to have Justin getting cruised at the diner and Brian getting jealous. Brian never did like it when someone played with one of his toys, and Justin's much more than a toy. Such fun repartee between Ted, Blake and Justin. ;)

I like how Daphne and Brandon are becoming friends. Soon he'll be enmeshed with the extended family. And, then, New York...

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