Date: Jul 02, 2016 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The end of a very long day.
I was so worried about what might have happened in the elevator; but then, self-defense trainings paid off.
And Brian took 2 important steps on the same day: he really is growing up.
Date: Jul 02, 2016 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Let's Dance.
Nice chapter, funny and hot.
I loved the part with Justin and his first gay magazine and also the dance shooting with Jessica as the Russian teacher.
And finally, Brian asking Justin to move in...
Date: Jul 02, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Getting his way, of course.
Funny, hot chapter and bittersweet at the end:
- "Justin really was a terrible influence. Brian was turning into a lesbian."
- Brian and Phil's phone call about confidentiality
- "His cock registered what he was seeing before his brain"
- "you could sell a double amputee a pair of ice-skates in the Sahara"
- the security code at the loft
- Michael shitty talk at lunch
Date: Jul 02, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 2 - An ad exec's job is never done.
While I like Daphne and Justin relationship, I also like Cynthia and Brian's.
Some high pressure for the return to NY, and Brandon coming to the rescue; that might turn the heat up...
Date: Jul 02, 2016 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 - And so it begins.
Their kisses... so hot, so sensual, amazing feeling...
Date: Jun 25, 2016 1:58 am Title: Chapter 38 - Wedding night.
Okay, this is ridiculous. I haven't posted a review for the final chapter because I didn't want the story to end, lol. It's not as if I haven't read it quite a few times previously and won't return to it again and again. 😊
Loved the humor and heat in the conclusion and the way the husbands communicate so well. â¤ï¸
I want to read about Justin's solo show; lots more of Brian and Justin with Brandon and Todd; Brian and Justin with their son; LaShaun; Jessica; etc., etc.
I am greedy, so I do want more! I'm hoping for "the next sequel" to this series, but I'd be happy with anything you choose to write. Just...more...please...
Date: Jun 18, 2016 12:40 am Title: Chapter 37 - Sharing the joy.
Such a heartwarming penultimate chapter--filled with dancing, laughter, teasing, and love. All the interactions between friends and family made me smile. I adore how the extended families grow ever larger and overlap.
So much love between Brian and Justin, just as it should be. â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: Jun 17, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 36 - A nerve wracking day.
I adore Brian's interaction with Sarah and his growing respect for her. Justin definitely does make Brian a better, kinder person.
Brian couldn't have asked for a better assistant than Cynthis. As he notes, she's truly a professionl business partner. She rocks!
My heart both aches for Brian that he didn't feel he had a real family previously and jumps for joy that he now does: a husband and a son. Such a fun interaction with Gus when Brian asks him to be the ringbearer--and especially after the men exchange rings.
The proposal and wedding are such an amazing grand gesture and so very Brian.
Date: Jun 17, 2016 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 35 - You can't trust anybody.
So glad Brian and Justin have found one another once again. *swoon* They belong together!
Love the way Brian orchestrated his proposal and their wedding with help from family and friends. Outclasses the prom in QaF, hands down.
Stupendous chapter that's satisfying on so many levels: romantic, sexual, playful, joyful and all-around feel good.
Love the way Justin's 23 here thinking he looks 17. Randy was 23 when QaF began, portraying 17-year-old Justin. Wonderful connection between your story, QaF, and real life.
It's so right and perfect that Brian doesn't believe in marriage in general but absolutely believes in marrying Justin. They're equally committed to one other. â¤ï¸â¤ï¸ The engraving inside Brian's ring reflects that commitment, as does the engraving inside Justin's ring, which also shows the playfulness in their relationship.
Yes, they'll always save the last dance for each other. 😊
Date: Jun 17, 2016 8:27 am Title: Chapter 34 - Far from home..
Good riddance, fiddler! You aren't going to need a muse where you're headed. *boo, hiss*
Can't wait for the ridiculously romantic event Brian has planned! â¤ï¸ Brian will be there, come hell or high water.
I really feel like I'm there when Brian gives a presentation. Do you have a background in advertising/marketing? You always present such fleshed-out concepts and keep Brian completely in character.
Maybe the next story in the series will have Brian and Justin visiting the Beaver Creek resort together? *hint, hint*
I'm so on board with how Brian dreams of protecting Justin with his new name! 😊
Date: Jun 17, 2016 7:07 am Title: Chapter 33 - What was he thinking?.
LMAO over the inept fiddler. Ethan is such a hilarious villain, even though he shoots Justin. I can envision him in a western movie, madly twirling his mustache, wondering why his victim won't stay tied to the train tracks, with sheriff Brian in his white hat riding to the rescue.
Thank you for the humor with which you infused this chapter! I can't stop chuckling over Justin taking off his clothes so they won't be ruined.
So sweet and sexy the way Brian, too, believes they're besheert. Of course, for Brian and Justin, being besheert also means lots of scorching hot sex!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 4:49 am Title: Chapter 32 - To Catch a Thief - Part 3.
Brian's so right. Justin could take that bastard Hobbs, fair fight or not. It again begs the question: Why didn't Justin take self-defense courses after the bashing?Aargh! That drives me crazy. (Well that and no mention of a civil suit against Hobbs.)
LMAO! I can just see LaShaun laughing at Brian and Jason's inept efforts at breaking and entering.
This chapter ends on a cliffie, but I know the villain--even if he has been somewhat clever--won't get away with his nefarious plot. He won't be twirling his mustache for long!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 4:21 am Title: Chapter 31 - To Catch a Thief - Part 2.
Brian's joy in his Sunshine asking him for the money is heartwarming. They really are partners, so Justin's able to set aside his pride and ask for help.
LaShaun is inspring. Heck, maybe he'll become president. I'm looking forward to (again) reading more about him in the next chapters. 😊
An eighth of a mini quiche: That would never be enough for me, lol. Don't think I'd even taste that small a sliver. And, drat, I don't have Brian's method of working it off.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 3:40 am Title: Chapter 30 - After the Theft.
So many interesting characters in this story, from new characters who appear in this chapter only (Florence, Muriel, and Natalie) to returning friends (Steven and Scott, Alex and Rob--and Curtis).
I love how Justin and Brian understand each other ever better, enough so that Justin feels comfortable asking Brian for a loan, knowing Brian wants to be the one Justin turns to.
And, goodness knows, the hot sex keeps me riveted!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 2:50 am Title: Chapter 29 - To Catch a Thief - Part 1 .
I really like the changeup of Justin being considered Peter Pan in this story because he never ages. Much nicer than Brian never maturing in QaF.
Lilah, Brian, and Jason all use good detecting skills to figure out who nicked Justin's paintings. Of course, the answer is so farfetched, how could they suspect the truth?
Brian's love for and protectiveness of Justin shines so brightly in this chapter. By hook or by crook, he'll get Justin's paintings back.
On to the next chapter as they search for the culprit...
Date: Jun 10, 2016 1:32 am Title: Chapter 28 - The Eye of the Storm - Part 2.
Keller's stunned reaction to Justin is just right. And Brian's statement about hiring Justin and fucking him... 😄
I feel so sad for Justin every time I read about his vanished paintings. But I know the Kintzer and Kinney detective duo are about to be on the case to find the dastardly villain. I can't help seeing that villain twirling his moustache and letting out an evil laugh. What a twit!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 27 - The Eye of the Storm - Part 1.
I'm a puddle of goo. Very satisfied goo.😋
So fun watching Justin interact with his friends and fellow artists.
The Ian follies are about to start...
Date: Jun 09, 2016 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Sunshine's Sunday.
"Oh, for fuck's sake, Mikey, nature gave you a dick. Use it!" LMAO, what a funny line and so in character.
I so prefer, as I'm sure most readers do, the Justin-Ethan connection in this story to that in the show. As if this Justin would ever return to Ian after Brian. Hah!
A blow job from Brian or Justin would make me look forward to a wax, too! 😉
Date: Jun 09, 2016 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Sunday.
So funny that Brandon and Brian used similar excuses to leave the last tricks to ever suck them off. And the way Brian passes on the hard-earned words of wisdom...perfect. When those studs fall, they fall hard. 😊
Ben using Brandon to spark Michael's jealousy, lol. Go, Ben!
â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸ Love the way Brian is gradually collecting all the witnesses, preparing for the big day.
Ugh, Ian the chin rat. Brian's unkown reason for hating violin music, lol. Shoo, fly, shoo. Perfect that Brian calls Brandon to share the comedy--as if Brian would touch Ian with a ten-foot pole. (The Keystone Cop routine that will ensue in the coming chapters already has me laughing.)
On a personal note, Andrew's reference to Moses Lake made me smile because I worked for a college based in Moses Lake which offered classes to U.S. military personnel in Europe. Never actually visited Moses Lake but made good friends among visitors to the HQ in Germany. Good memories.
Date: Jun 09, 2016 5:16 am Title: Chapter 24 - Truly, Madly, Deeply.
I think I forgot to say earlier how much I admire this Justin who took self-defense courses and stands up to bullies. It never made sense to me in the show that Justin didn't take self-defense/martial arts classes to help him recover from the bashing. It would be so empowering. The 'training' he got from Cody in the Pink Posse arc was pretty much useless.
Aw, it's so Justin to stay in touch with Gus, not only because he loves Gus but also to maintain the connection between Brian and Gus. That behavior is perfectly in character for Justin.
Date: Jun 09, 2016 3:53 am Title: Chapter 23 - Celebration.
*fanning myself* For some unknown reason, I overheated a few times while reading this chapter, lol. Hmm, why does this keep happening?
Hahaha, Justin and Brian have just slightly different ideas about shopping.
I'm revelling in the deepening bond of friendship between Brian, Justin, Todd, and Brandon.
Jessica's one spry lady at 75! I had tears of happiness in my eyes as I read about the celebrations. I adore the way she has welcomed everyone into her family. â¤ï¸
Date: Jun 09, 2016 2:57 am Title: Chapter 22 - Making love - Part 3.
LOL, the doctorly, doctorious, doctoresque wordplay. 😄 LMAO over Scott and the stapler and Steven and the coffee.
Those thugs didn't stand a chance--not even against Brian and Justin--but particularly when Brandon and Todd joined in.
I'm so happy that Brandon has recognized and declared his love for Todd.â¤ï¸
Date: Jun 09, 2016 2:34 am Title: Chapter 21 - Making love - Part 2.
Love these two men and their conern for each other. They may both have acted foolishly in penetrating each other without a condom, but now they're getting tested--and soon the day they're wishing for will arrive. It's so perfect that, independent of each other, they've gone for testing and have given up tricks of any kind. 😊
The boys barebacking won't make me all hot and bothered, not at all, lol.
Aw, so sweet that way Justin bought flowers for Sarah. â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2016 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Wedding night.
Again, I read the whole of your work without so much as a comment.... my bad. I admit, I nearly overdosed of sex scenes.... but I really enjoyed this sequel and look forward to the next one. I feel sorry for Brandon and Todd being invited to a "sleep" over since they are still on the latex train.... it's evil to let them witness what level B/J's coupling has reached... but perhaps it'll be a positive influence... anyway.... no more imposing... I'll be waiting patiently for further writing.
Date: Jun 08, 2016 5:14 am Title: Chapter 20 - Making love.
â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸ Love, love, love these two men! They sure do make the heat waves roll through my body, lol.