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Reviewer: Nanzz Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2016 10:52 am Title: Chapter 13

Totally enjoyed this story

Keep up with your enjoyable story's 



Author's Response:

Thank you! We have the next story called Old Friend :) http://www.kinnetikdreams.com/Adminftp/eFiction355/viewstory.php?sid=233

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 13

It's sad that Ted couldn't find happiness with Blake.  But he has the gang to back him up.



Author's Response:

Yes! Thank you for reading the story!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 12

Maybe Ted needs to sell his condo and start over?



Author's Response:

That is true! :) Ted will buy a house in my next FF. It is editing now :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 11

Emmett is always there for Ted.

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Date: May 27, 2016 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

Could things have gotten worse?  At least Brian enjoyed it.

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Date: May 27, 2016 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 9

Maybe Blake isn't as happy as Ted thought?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 8

It appears that Ted is not the only one in the dumps.  Poor Darren.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hopefully things are getting better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Do things get better?  Can Emmett help?



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Yes he can :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

Turning into a nag will do that to you.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Ted.  It's a shame that the things he and Blake enjoyed together had to change.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 3

Ted, unfortunately, is not happy.  I can relate.



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It`s a pity but he is not :(

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2

Ted seems to be treating Blake like he's his kid.  He wants him to have a better life.  Need to hear Blakes version.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This is the first time I've read this and it's so sad.  Hopefully future chapters tell us what''s happening in Ted and Blakes lives.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to Kinnetik Dreams. We love getting new authors to post their stuff here. I'm looking forward to reading this! TAG

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