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Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks Darling! ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2016 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's sad that Michael had to die for Justin and Brian to find their way back together. But I'm really glad that they did.



Author's Response:

I know I was evil to kill off Michael... But there reunion helped define them going forward... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2016 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1

great one shot-  thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well done.  This could have worked in the show. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Darling, to bad us fangirls couldn't have had a little input with the show’s writers... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so full of emotions! I felt like I was inside the story from beginning to end. No! I am NOT a Brian/Michael fan and if I'm honest with myself, I felt that their co-dependent relationship was better off ended in the series. BUT I would have rathered that they just went their separate ways rather than to see Michael succumb to his injuries from the bombing. The way this was written, I could feel Brian's anguish at not being able to have closure and the only person who really understood that was Debbie. I thought it was most appropriate that SHE would be the one to get through to him. Lindsay really needed a muzzle and her own life the way I think Michael always did (yeah, I'll be taking care of that in my own work...LOL) but I'm so happy that in the end, Justin had made his own decision without thought for anyone else's needs and desires. Their talk at the end was poignant and touching, in short, so Brian and Justin!! 

Looking forward to MORE from you soon!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Yes, it was an emotional rollercoaster, and it was evil of me to kill off Michael but it seemed so right when I was writing it. You're right Deb was the perfect person to give Brian closure and the strength to finally admit his true feelings for Justin. I love how you take care of Lindsay, putting her in her place. It was important that Brian really heard Justin and what he needed for them move forward, communication was what was always lacking in their relationship... I really need to get back to writing, my muse hasn't been amused or enthused much recently... It must be all that dirt under my fingernails from gardening... he, he, he... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Justin finally demands what he needs and hopefully will get it.



Author's Response:

I think they're both ready to try and give each other what they need to make their relationship work. Because they realize that they need each other in their lives... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2016 2:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

not nice making me cry this early in the day...but seriously, I love the flow of this...the earnest plea in Debbie's advice...and the way the boys come together in desperate yet sincere need for each other

great job!

Charle

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, I didn't mean to make you cry! I know it's a little shocking I killed off Michael, but it put everything into perspective for Brian, as well as Justin... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

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