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Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 8:15 am Title: Chapter 1

What a perfect story to round out my birthday reading. No idea why I hadn't read it before, so I'm glad this popped up as the random story when I entered the website earlier. :)

You portray so well the battle Brian was waging with himself almost from the day he picked up Justin. My twink - THE twink. How horrible for Brian to admit that he likes having Justin around. LOL

That Brian's proud of Justin permeates the whole show . . .right up until the very end (and beyond). Love how this story reflects that. <3

~Karynn



Author's Response:

I don't know why this didn't show in my inbox when you wrote it, but thank you so much for the review. I remember thinking when I watched this episode when it aired, that there seemed to be so much missing. I hoped to fix that here.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2016 1:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for this wonderful gap_filler. The TV series kind of left us hanging. 



Author's Response:

You are welcome. It is now head canon for me.

Thank you for taking the time to comment with your lovely compliment.

Saje

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great insight. Now that I know what Brian was thinking I'm off to rewatch that episode. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thank you, I literally watched ten seconds, wrote, watched ten more seconds, and wrote some more. Hopefully it worked. It is now head canon for me.

Saje

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love having Brian's perspective of this... of course he is still fighting the feelings he has for Justin.  My favorite part was him finding Justin sleeping on the sofa. and recognizing his feelings, but trying to dismiss them anyway!

 



Author's Response:

Thank You. I think Brian was still fighting everything Justin at this point and for quite a while afterwords. I have a couple more ideas for gapfillers that i might decide to do yet.

Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2016 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1

You've entered Brian's head and let us see where he was at.  Makes perfect sense to me.



Author's Response:

It made perfect sense to me too, hence why I HAD to write it.

Saje

Reviewer: 4depthoflove Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh waht I wouldn't do to be able to hear Brian's thoughts like this -  love these little glimpses where his guard is completely down because he thinks no one knows but him

Charle



Author's Response:

We did not get a lot of glimpses into Brian's motivations in the series. This is my way of rectifying that.

Saje

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is the way it SHOULD have been done!! I always hated that Justin didn't stand his ground in that moment, although I understood it *rolls eyes at that thought* Great Job!! 

 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle



Author's Response:

Thank you. For me, this is my new Head Canon. I think this is the timeframe that Brian realizes there is more to the twink than meets the eye.

 

Saje

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 7:44 am Title: Chapter 1

You've been a busy writer! Thanks for another gap-filler! TAG

PS . . . TBP withdrawal . . . Just sayin'!



Author's Response:

This was one of those little things that would not leave me alone the other night.

TBP coming soon.

Saje

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