Date: Jun 06, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 20
I'll hang in there also it feels a little weird.
Author's Response:
yep, I don't want any readers to get too complacent.
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2016 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm not against a threesome fic... And I just really really can't... I just don't get it. Why is any one still reading this story if they are to narrow minded for a loving threesome to take place? We've been through severe violence against babies for forks sakes.
Ok rant over... I love this story... Standing ovation !!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoy my work so far and that you have kept an open mind. I am not against a threesome either, just not for this particular work.
Thank you for the compliment, :P (i will take my curtain call now) LOL
Saje
Date: May 15, 2016 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 20
Actually, I like the threesome-ness. It feels healthy. Finally. TAG
Author's Response:
Jane makes a great intermediary, doesn't she. Saje
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2016 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 20
Sigh. Brian answers questions truthfully and Justin doesn't like the answers. Was Justin actually going to leave without Molly? Woah! You had the horse go over the car? Gutsy. I'm glad that you let Justin listen in on Brian and Jane's conversation. It probably the only way he's believe and understand what Brian would try to tell him. Things look like they are coming to a head, especially if Jane is calling in her husband as backup. Boy, Brian admitting to everything is mind blowing. Justin not feeling jealous of Jane is - very mature of him. In a way looks as if she filling a place where Claire and Joan should have been and weren't. Sort of like Lindsay's place in Brian's life. I just recently found the opinion option. Just pretend I hit liked on every chapter.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately it is Brian's habit, when cornered, to answere with a minimum of words. In this scene, I think it hit him full force, exactly how much danger Justin just put everyoine in by coming there.
I like to think Justin would not have made it all the way back to Jackson before realizing what an asshole he was being and coming back. Besides, Molly is no longer a child, and used to Justin's QO's.
Everything is coming to a head. And we finally see that Jane is not perfect. She has her wn daily battles with her demons too. Fear, overexertion, and exhaustion lead to the car smashing. She can certainly match any of the fags on the QO scale. LOL
Justin is maturing. Unfortunately no one does this until they are forced to see a situation from a point of view they had never considered before.
Brian is very lucky that DR. Anders knew of Jane. I don't know how he could have made it this far without her so quickly. I think she will become a part of his inner circle, even after they separate.
Oh, and with you leaving a review on every chapter, I assumed the thumbs up, but thank you.