Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2016 4:41 am Title: Chapter 3

It seems like Brian has some powerful enemies - lots of them too. Hmmmm. TAG

Author's Response:

You can't be an asshole your whole life and not have them. Good thing he has friends too.  Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2016 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

We learn Cynthia's and Brian's story and it is not pretty.  It does explain Cynthia's devotion to Brian.  This is where we learn of Missy for the first time.  This was obviously before he met Mikey.  Brian should have remembered Justin's PSA.  Never take drugs that aren't prescribed from a doctor.  lol.  We learn a little of his special gift, the one that helped him become the wealthy person he is so fast.  We learn that Brian can relate to Emmett which is the basis of their unique friendship.  I see Justin as a selfish twat at times, perhaps distance will give him clarity? We have Harry, Brian's attorney and Everett, then there is a fax.  Was Brian anticipating what the fax foretold? Next we have Carl and Debbie. Carl is retiring and plans a cruise with Debbie.  Those two items seem important, but why?  Next we have the man on the bench shame he didn't ping with Marc.  Then you leave us with Stockwell, so know we know who will be causing problems.

Author's Response:

I should have you write my chapter summaries since I suck so badly at it that I don't do it. This chapter certainly had a lot going on! Had to keep referring to my outline. I just posted a new chapter

Happy reading!

Saje