Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 6

Fortunately, Jennifer is there with the POA.

Author's Response:

Not everyone will be happy about it though.

Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great opening.  Brian's in the water, the rescue boats on the other side of the ship.  Cynthia followed close behind, thank goodness she's a swimmer.  Emmett is the only one that knows what the bad guy looks like and can identify him.  Ted is dense about the whole thing.  Ms. Lyons is going to be trouble. 

They do say your life flashes across your mind at a time like this.  Evidently it's true.  But you don't kill the hero, which I classify Brian as, so I'm not worried... much.

Jennifer is being directed to the hospital.  With her and Cynthia on his side, Brian is sure to pull through.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment. Lots of stuff going on quickly in this chapter. A series of misadventure and terrible timing. Yeah, thank goodness for Cynthia and her take charge attitude. Ms. Lyons will be trouble. No, I wont kill the hero. That would break my heart.

Everyone is stronger than they think.

Saje